The shore seemed so beautiful1
When reflected in your eyes2
We laughed so subltly at the fragility of humans3
Your picture4
Smiles like it always has5
And it is me who has changed6
What seems wrong is only a reminder of7
how much I believed8
The mirror9
reflects what it always has10
But with your memory11
in its wake12
I accept13
It's just the way things are14
And have to be15
Still, with all there was16
You had to leave17
The sun18
shines like it always has19
But it seems somehow incomplete20
The wind21
Whispers like it always has22
but now it feels like it is you23
Who is whispering to me24
And life25
Goes on, as it always will26
It changes, as it always shall27
With so much left gone,28
and yet29
so much to complete.
A contest entry
- Broken Hearted Poetry by Hope4TheBest.
175 points, ended March 22, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I dont really like romance,but this poem was very good still.Good job,sweet dictionary and beautifull finishing.BRAVO.
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Thanks.
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this really made me cry
it made me think of why i made this contest
i like this alot
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Thank you! That means a lot.
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