Forever

Boys had cooties, girls wore Mary Janes1

Goosebumps were scary and peace frogs were cool2

it was fun to get dirty, and play in the rain3

we were best friends since we had started school4

you cuddled and huggled and snuggled me close5

as i cried and cried and cried from the pain6

you fixed my heart that my ex-boyfriend broke7

you took me outside to dance in the rain8

The sparks and fire befan to break free9

our lips met in gentle harmony 10

how i saw there was more to you and me11

we were soulmates destined together we'll see12

I wear a white dress and tell you I do 13

Together forever, I'll always love you

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I had to write this for English... ughhh

Its choppy i know

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  • DarkOneShadow
    March 22

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    hehe.. perhaps

    But this was from the heart and genuine so you can't go wrong there. Though you are right that it might need touching up, you did no wrong in the meaning department.

    Good job.

    DarkOneShadow