Boys had cooties, girls wore Mary Janes1
Goosebumps were scary and peace frogs were cool2
it was fun to get dirty, and play in the rain3
we were best friends since we had started school4
you cuddled and huggled and snuggled me close5
as i cried and cried and cried from the pain6
you fixed my heart that my ex-boyfriend broke7
you took me outside to dance in the rain8
The sparks and fire befan to break free9
our lips met in gentle harmony 10
how i saw there was more to you and me11
we were soulmates destined together we'll see12
I wear a white dress and tell you I do 13
Together forever, I'll always love you
Author notes
I had to write this for English... ughhh
Its choppy i know
Comments
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hehe.. perhaps
But this was from the heart and genuine so you can't go wrong there. Though you are right that it might need touching up, you did no wrong in the meaning department.
Good job.
DarkOneShadow


