If i1
treated2
you3
the way4
you treat 5
me...6
We wouldn't be friends7
If i8
said to9
you10
the things11
you say12
to13
me...14
We wouldn't be friends15
If i16
used 17
you18
the way19
you use20
me...21
We wouldn't be friends22
If i23
played24
with25
you26
the way27
you play28
with29
me...30
We wouldn't be friends31
If i 32
wasnt so33
god damn34
fucking35
passive...36
We wouldn't be friends37
If i38
didn't39
have such40
a soft41
spot for42
you...43
We wouldn't be friends44
***45
But i 46
dont 47
treat 48
you49
the way50
you treat51
me...52
And i 53
dont say54
to55
you56
the things57
you say58
to59
me...60
And i61
dont62
use63
you64
the way65
you use66
me...67
And i68
dont play69
with70
you71
the way 72
you play73
with74
me...75
And i 76
am too77
god damn78
fucking79
passive...80
And i81
do have82
a soft83
spot84
for85
you...86
I just might not stay that way....87
Author notes
Hmmm...what i felt at the time....i have no doubt it'll go unnoticed..but whats not why i 'wrote' it. Writing down what you feel has a way of taking all the anger out of a situation..well atleast it worked this time.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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OOH HONEST
totally know how you feel. i used to feel that way all the time and then i told everyone to fuck off. haha. ok. it's not the most constructive way to go about things but DAMN it feels so good sometimes.
Writing is quite theraputic. I liked how the beginning directly contrasts with the end. thanks for sharing
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Thanks all - yeah venting on they keyboard is goooooood
ShOrTaSs -
I know the feeling. Very well. And I think I know who it's about. I agree- writing is a good way of letting it all out. This is a good poem, keep writing
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youch what gives?! cool poem speak soon xxx
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Really nice write, really liked it, it really does help just to write down your feelings, just to vent your frustraition, it really helps me. Keep them coming. xxx
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oouch babe, hope your ok
guessing tis about a guy, im here ok? i know you've probably got loads of people saying to you right about now, but c'mon the man-eater (thats moi!) knows all about men! scary thought, huh? anyway, nice write babe, loved it! def your best one yet! l8az love ya sky xxxxxxx
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