Mischief of Creation and one students ablity to get into trouble

Creation Mischief is my current project. I've put it down once or twice only to be pulled back into it. It all started, and I'm a very slow writer, two Christmas's ago. My darling hubby bought me a FlyPen. It was wonderfully generous gift on his part. He had really thought about this one. It's a pain, but i use it for him. 1

I was randomly writing, when the first line of Mischief evolved ~ 'In the beginning I awoke to find darkness surrounding me. I searched throughout the damp cave until I found my satchel of herbs.'2

From there I've just ran with it. I plan to finish it before the next school session starts in September.3

I'm an Earth based person, so some, if not all of my stories revolve around the earth or a planet. This started out as a Goddess Mother/Gaia story and evolved into a student project and the mischief one gets into when left on her own.4

Ummm links, I'm terrible at these, but I'm a willin' to try. Part 15

Now my parts aren't chapter, but my selfconscience wanting the approval of my SW brethren.

Author notes

Smell is my big motivator. If it doesn't have smell in it then how can I, the reader, identify with the story.

My smells are lavender and vanilla and freshly turned soil.

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  • Benwater
    August 14

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    Interesting You mentioned going to school. Just wondering, what grade are you in?
    I'll read the first part.


    • SageSyren Greeters member
      August 14
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      Not sure where you read that. I don't personal go to school, but I homeschool my youngest and I work at a school.
      Unless you meant the part where it turned into a 'student project'. That would be for Sabrina, the character in my story
      Brooke


  • Lady Eventide Greeters member
    March 26

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    And thy brethren shall follow thee wherever thou travel...

    Sorry.

    I'm sure you know by now that I'm addicted. I read like...three or four chapters one time in a sitting. Yep. Definitely addiction.

    Good luck in this contest.


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    March 22

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    A sachet for my thoughts

    I like that first sentence it really gives the reader and identity with the characters sense and it also lets the reader interpret that the character could go many ways. My sense is one of healing and tranquility when I formulated that sentence in my mind. So well done on that front for giving me a sooth affect for the first line of your story because I am interested to know how the sachet fits in with the story.

    I hope that you achieve what you are looking for within this story and I shall click on the link when I am done and have a read through it. I am keen to know how the story is going.

    Thank you for entering my contest and abiding by the rules.
    I love the smell of vanilla.
    Good Luck.


    Blair

    • SageSyren Greeters member
      March 22
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      Thank you for reading this. I had to do it twice. The first entry got lost.

      I am glad that this was interesting enough for you to presuade you to read the first part.
      Again thanks
      Brooke

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