I Wonder....

I never seemed to notice you
But now I’m feeling something new
I don’t know exactly how to feel
I’m wondering could this be real?1

I never thought it would be like this
I wonder what it would be like to kiss
You, I cant stop smiling when I think of you
I laugh at the stupid things you do2

My stomach ties when my phone rings
And it says its you, my heart practically sings
Im freaking cuz this is so surprising
This new emotion inside me arising 3

I catch myself thinking about you
I wonder if you think of me too.
This feeling is different
I’ve said that before, but this time i mean it.

Do the lines rhyme well enough?

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  • Non Paix
    April 11

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    this was a good write The lines rhyme fine, some seem a bit forced though, it kind of throws off the flow of the entire poem...But all and all, it is a very good write Keep up teh good work!


  • XxSkyTheRainbowxX
    March 25

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    OMG! ^^

    Lol this was a wonderful poem to read it cought my eyes!! haha and yes it did rhyme well enough^^ just keep on writing and good work

    Sky♥