kiss me poison.

I comprehend the painful sensations,
of heart break.
The disturbance,
of that first incision on my arm.
The Loss of Innocence within,
the first glimpse of blood.
I love you.
Through the fire,
and the rain.
No heart cannot be fixed,
with a needle and some thread.
Or duct tape can amend,
just about anything.
so kiss me,
with your poison lips.
And slowly,
together life simply slips.
kiss me poison,
so i can perish with a smile.

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  • rinzu
    1 day ago
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    i could feel the pain...!!! thanks for reminding me of the pain...

    thanks...good luck


  • Neolittlefish
    April 8

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    I liked the way it flowed, the pace was very good. I especially liked the part about the duct tape, for some reason it made me smile! And the ending was great, really beautiful and sad and the same time. Great time and thanks for entering my contest.
    Neo


  • Violette silver member
    April 4

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    OMG

    you wrote this? are you freakin kidding me?! that's awesome. i hadn't come across a poetry writer yet. that was amazing, very dark, very captivating haha i read it twice just to try to find the words to describe what you have written here. to be honest, it's beyond words, thankyou.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, ending: 5.