Meaningless.

I told a guy something I thought I felt,1

But I took it back,2

I hurt someone by saying what I thought was true,3

But I took it back,4

I stood up for what I thought was right,5

But I took it back,6

I laughed at what I thought was funny,7

But I took it back8

Everything I say, no longer has a meaning.9

...I take that back.10

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Sorry to those people. You know who you are. I know my words mean nothing to you right now, but I just thought you should know.

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  • Tiger-Lily
    March 21

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    Whoa...I like this. It's different and yet alarmingly charming in its own way. Very thoughtful too. Well done on a provoking write.

    - HT

  • TheDecree
    March 19

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    Oh, this is really good. Completely well written and it absolutely draws the reader in. This poem is fantastic.

    Nice job. (:


  • TyShade
    March 18

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    Words are stone but stone can be washed away by water and the words written on them faded Good poem btw


  • TootsiePop
    March 17
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    I feel like that sometimes...great job!


  • Preeti Prasad
    March 17
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    ya i no i was talking about ur A.N.


  • Preeti Prasad
    March 17
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    ...u take them back? jk lol


    • Toxic Valentine
      March 17
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      No I mean, when I told a guy I loved him. I went back to him and told him that I changed my mind and that the words didn't mean anything any more.

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