Dont Leave

In the middle of a cold stormy night i awaken in your arms.1

Slightly frightened i gasp for air.2

No one is around.3

No one is near.4

Being alone with u scares me just a little.5

Not knowing what you will do.6

Why you are here i don't know.7

You whisper in my ear "it's ok. i wont let any thing get you."8

I feel your soft lips on mine.9

Our arms enter twine.10

I brush my fingers down your neck.11

"i love you" you say.12

But if my parents catch you in here, you know they will kill you.13

You don't care.14

"but they don't get here till 3:00 in the morning."15

You rub my back trying to comfort me. 16

and it works. 17

I don't want you to go.18

Now that you are here protecting me from my fears.19

I don't want you to ever leave me.20

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well it was supposed to be a poem. but it makes a better story. i hope you like it.

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  • ReaperSoulStealer
    June 21, 2005
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    Nice... As usual.

  • Shawnnessy
    June 20, 2005
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    thank you. so much. i wrote it for a contest. but for some reason it didnt take.

  • Shawnnessy
    June 20, 2005
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    thank u... it was supposed to be entered in a contest. but when i entered it. it didnt take.. i dont know why

  • TheTasteOfInk14
    June 20, 2005
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    This is an amazing story!!! Your a good story teller!!! Good Job!!!!!

    ****Kiara****


  • transcendental baby gold member
    June 20, 2005
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    You are a story teller Ms. Princess A romantic one too

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