a contest entry :) for TyShade's contest

I am not completley sure if this is what you were asking for TyShade but i tried 1

*after having a neardeath experience but rescued by her lover*2

She looked sad, and confused while having her lunch with her boyfriend. Just sitting there, a little hunched over, almost trying to hide. "What is wrong?" asked the worried man.3

She looked up thinkingly, still deep in thought and now saying them aloud. "What if my time was up... and then you messed with Gods plan?" she whispered but with a smile. She couldn't look him in the eye, nearly scared of his expression.4

"Are you saying you WANTED to die?" He sounded a little angry, but remained calm and waited for her reply.5

She looked up and gazed into his coral blue eyes. She was completley serious, although she rarely was. So this was a new look for her. "I don't think it would make a difference in the world. Me dying wouldn't have changed anything."6

He reached for her hand without hesitation and she didn't refuse his comfortment. "It would've made a difference in MY world. It would have changed EVERYTHING."

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for Ramon and Dayleena... I LOVE YOU GUYS!!

A contest entry

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