Sweet memories

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A single touch, a single breath, a single moment caught in time.
A simple smile, a simple kiss, a simple touch made in time.
A sweet caress, a sweet mistake, a sweet memory lost in time.

just something

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  • asthray.heart
    March 17
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    I love this (: I memba you showing me this. I am glad you posted it.
    Great job.


  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    March 17

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    Cute :D

    Would be perfect, if not for "smiple"
    I think I know a bit about the inspiration for this regardless, really nice I like the semi-parallelness of this piece.. and yet, each line is different. Intended, I know ^_^

    Thanks so much for sharing this with us, Lizzy