Best Friend

I cant remember how many times ive cried to you
Or how many times you said I Love You
How many times I was there when you needed me
Or when you spoke up when I found no words to speak1

I hate it when you’re hurt and crying
Just know Im willing to keep trying
To help you when your falling
and pick up my phone when you’re calling2

Remember you’re my best friend
and I’ll love you until the end
Im here to tend and mend your heart
I was from the very start3

I’ll be you’re shoulder to cry on
We’ve formed this unbreakable bond
I’m always here in night and day
Cuz you’re amazing in everyway4

I dont think I’ll find a friend like you
You’re brave, strong, sweet, and true
You’re my best friend Janelle
I love you

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  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    March 19

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    This was adorable. XD Simplistic and acutely put. I like that you wrote this as a nonfictional piece, at least, I think you did. XD

    - HT

  • Non Paix
    March 17

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    Good write. Reading it, you can definetly pick up on the emotions you were feeling as it was being writen. Not many people can write something so well about a best friend, usually it is a bf or gf...this was very good


  • Maggie Kay
    March 17

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    That was a wonderful piece. You make me so jelous. Cos thats how ifeel about my mate but she nolonger feels the same way. shes drifting away and i cant stop it.
    I have fallen in love with this piece.
    Please write more like it


  • Five-By-Five
    March 16

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    oh my god that was amazing i used to be like that with my best friend we were like sisters you have caught the very essence of friendship in this piece good going i love this good job keep on writing your very talented