*Chapter one*
*Story start*
*My Pov.*1
I was walking toward the bus with my favorite friend, Allie. We were giggling and asking each other who we would go out with if we were sent into the Naruto world.2
"Who would you go out with if you were sent to the Naruto world?" I asked my BFFL.3
"I don't know; I think it would be between Tobi-Kun, Naruto-Kun or Kisame-Kun." She answered.4
I giggled at her and said "You mean Swirly-San, Whisker-Kun or Sushi-sama."I laughed.5
She blushed and said "Don't make fun of them, Miname." (We called each other japanese nicknames)6
She continued "And anyway your choices are probably wierder."7
"No way!!" I said pouting.8
"Well then prove it!!" She argued.9
"Alright I will!!" I said, a triumpant smile on my face.10
"Ok who is it then!!!!!" she asked excited and now jumping up and down.11
"Well my choice would be Deidara-Kun." I replyed cooly.12
Her eyes widened and she said shocked "Man, I didn't expect you to like him. I expected you to say Sasuke-sama."13
"No way!!" I yelled a disgusted look on my face.14
"So what's the nickname you gave Sasuke-sama?" she questioned.15
"Chicken-*bunny*" I replied easily. She just giggled. We finally got to the bus and walked up the steps going to the middle of the bus. And as usual, we sat together. Soon the bus started and we continued our conversation.16
"So what did you draw in art this time?" she asked interested.17
"Just a picture of Chicken *bunny* and Whiskers kissing like on episode 4." I replyed casually.18
She frowned then asked "Can I have it?"19
"No, you'll just tear it up." I said unhappily. "Besides, I know you hate episode 4 because of the kiss anyway." I said smirking an evil smile. She just started to pout.20
"So, not fair!!!" She whined.21
"I know."I said the evil smile growing wider by the second.22
I made A cliffhanger for the first time in my life. I am proud of myself.
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Author notes
I am now starting to become a writer. 
I made a cliffhanger. Muhahahaha!! :)
Comments
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Lol, I liked it, cute. Lol. Love the nicknames...hehehe, All hail the Deidara fangirls! Muahaha
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i really like it you should make it like a sreenwrite it would be really nice.
oui oui write more
aye

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KAWAII!!!
I love it!!! it is easy to read and understand for me because my english is bad. but i got all the picture in my head while reading this story!!! You did a really good job!!! way to go!!!

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Good flow and Style, I don't know bout Naruto, but your the way you wrote it was very well done!


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you are so mean sister. why did you say sushi for me? Lol. I love this so far. Hope you get five reviews soon! I want you to finish this and we shall discuss it, sister! I love how you call Sasuke chicken-shit. lol.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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love this story...

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I will not continue until I have five reviews. I am so evil.

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