Chance Meeting

I met Lin quite by accident one day, while surfing the Internet, I stumbled into a chat room and his name struck me as unique and exotic. I made small talk with those around me, but Lin, had my full attention with his wit and humor. Little did he know in those few minutes of seeing him talk to the ladies he had peaked my interest. But I was to shy to say anything, who could want me? A mom of four children, married, and one whose attractiveness had long sense faded with the trials and errors of life. We exchanged pleasantries, and pictures, and found we had a lot in common. I loved music, and history, as did he. After a few chats (this was several nights later), I decided to disregard everything I had heard about how it wasn’t a good idea to meet anyone from on line, I had to meet Lin, I needed to feel passion and I knew I could find it somewhere deep within his gray blue eyes. 1

We decided to meet on July 18th, at 2:00pm at the local park, it was to be a warm day, so I had plans of swimming, and enjoy our time together in the coolness of the falls, that spilled forth down the mountain. I dropped the kids off at the baby sitters, freshened up a bit, dabbed a bit of perfume on, in all the right places, and went off to meet Lin at our rendezvous location. I must say I was nervous, not in the sense I was meeting Lin, but because I was about to make a drastic move that would forever change my life. I was going to have an affair, I wasn’t 100% sure it would happen, but I knew that I was going to try, I needed it that much. 2

When I pulled up into the parking lot, I knew him immediately, he had this air about him, such a smoothness, that in an instant, I know that yes, today I would be having my first affair. He rushed up to greet me with open arms, I fell into them, I had needed this so long, I just didn’t realize how badly until I started to cry. Oh great! I thought to myself, here I am meeting this incredibly wonderful man, and I am a blubbering mess. But Lin seemed to understand, he held me and stroked my hair, and said its okay babe, let it all out. I did, and then some, I never felt like such a fool, but he made it seem like it was nothing, that women meet him all the time and cry on him, however I knew this wasn’t the case. 3

We laid out our blankets on the ground under a nice little shade tree, I picked this time of day, because I knew no one would be around, and if things got hot we could do with each other what we pleased without worry. I quickly slid off my shorts and t-shirt, and revealed my deep blue bathing suit, I had chosen my blue one because it showed off my curves in all the right places, and made my eyes seem to dance. Lin was in a pair of deep green swim trunks that left absolutely nothing to the imagination, I could do nothing but stare, and pray that my deepest desires would come true. 4

We slipped into the waters, and despite the 90+ temp outside, the water had an icy bite to it, that made Lin put his arms around me and warm me up. I laid my head back into his chest, and enjoyed the warmth of his embrace. I didn’t want to move, but suddenly he turned me around there I was face to face with those blue gray eyes of his, and suddenly his lips were on mine, in the most passionate, softest kiss I had ever had. I practically melted then and there, I started kissing back, losing all control of my body, I put my arms around his neck, and simply melted into his body. To my surprise, he was hard, and I mean rock hard, I guess it could have been the combination of the cold water, and our kiss, but I suspect it had more to do with our heated kiss. Suddenly he had me lifted up out of the water, and pulled my legs to wrap around his waist, “OH GOD”, I cried, does he know I need this, can he tell, do I seem desperate? I prayed not, as he suddenly moved his lips from mine and trailed them down my neck flicking his soft tongue against the delicate flesh of my ears, I moaned half consciously in his ear, this just made him trail his tongue further down my neck, while pulling my suit down over my breasts, so that his tongue could trail across my erect nipples. All that escaped my half opened lips was something that sounded like a sigh mixed in with Oh Lin. Suddenly I found myself naked in the water, I had became so entranced in his kisses, and touching that I never felt it go. He tossed it onto the bank, and continued his exploration of my body. I was in heaven, as his fingers trailed down my stomach, long since tight from having children, yet he didn’t seem to mind that I wasn’t perfect. His hands found what they were seeking, my center, my core, the essence of my womanhood. I shivered as his fingers found my pleasure spot, and gasped as he slipped two fingers into my body. I laid my head upon his chest as he held me with his weight, and let his fingers play with me so delicately. I decided, it was time to do a little playing of my own, I removed his shorts and let his hard member spring free from his shorts, and started to rub up and down its length, he moaned and quickened his pace. Suddenly I could contain my self no longer and I needed him to take me, he lifted me up again and put my body slowly down over the length of his tool, I shuttered at the size of the head that was penetrating my womanhood, I had never felt so filled. We moved slowly at first, him leaning me back just so my hair would touch the water, while he held me up with his hand behind my back, and used the other hand to rub across my breast. I could feel the urgency and need we both shared, and the need over came us, and we walked out of the water, I needed him further inside of me, and I needed him now. 5

He laid me down on the blanket, and placed my legs up over his shoulders, and quickly thrust into me. I bit back a scream that tried to escape my lips, the pleasure was so intense that it wasn’t long until I was matching him thrust for thrust, and clawing his back. I knew we were both close to climaxing, as his thrust started going deeper into me, and I started to shiver, at the precise moment I moaned in orgasmic pleasure, he spilled his seed deep inside my body, shaking and moaning, while my hot dripping mound squeezed the seed from his body, not wanting to waste a drop. We lay naked in each others arms for a while, then we decided to get dressed and go and find some food, as our lovemaking had left us ravaged in more ways than one. We decided that day, that we would meet at that exact same spot every week, until winter. When winter came, our tryst would become well more than just an affair……It would become our life…….6

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  • sidewinder
    January 21, 2004
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    hmmmm...
    and to think I read the the third episode of this when i started....
    Tho this didn't disappoint me my friend!
    I did enjoy very much!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • November 6, 2003
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    I think you did a great job on your first story! Lots of visuals to feast the mind upon and water sex is always wonderful! I thought the romantic ending was a very nice touch here.

    F-R-us

  • Cristos
    November 4, 2003
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    Crikey. I've said that before. Very steamy, your words leaving nothing to the imagination. Drawing some really vivid imagery. I particularly liked the legs over the shoulders...nice one...I like your approach, very direct, explicit, and descriptive of both thoughts, emotions, butterflies, motions, and well...the rest. Very hot once again...peace
    Chris
    Edited on Nov 04, 3:01 because 'of spelling'.

  • Immortality
    November 2, 2003
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    bluegreenwaters

    HOT DAMN GIRL! This is Fantastic. Great write. The eroticness was felt. Ohh good expression.

    Much Love
    |Kati|

  • C.W. Bush
    November 2, 2003
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    Whoa, I don't think I should've read this.

    Hot write you've got here Carrie.

  • Maryke
    November 1, 2003
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    Well it certainly was an awesome attempt at a first try! I know some people who i must recommend this to as they will enjoy it more so than you could imagine. Awesome job, loved it, especially the whole "internet dating" part, gave it a good feel seeing as the circumstances its posted on. Awesome, cant say that enough.

    Maryke

  • JurneesRainbow
    October 31, 2003
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    Perfect with a capitol P

    *Finishes her last cigarette* Damn I just opened this pack when I started reading this!?!?

    My my my my my....

    This ws so freaking fantastic! I am amazed at your passion to write such sensual things. You blow me away every time sweety. I think it's perfect. With all my love to you SWEET 'UMS!

    Love,
    ~BettY~


  • Marcellus
    October 21, 2003
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    Wow! Damn that is hot!
    Awesome release of passion.
    Marcellus

  • Shibbi
    October 21, 2003
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    Well written. Great emotion and description in this piece. though i cant say I believe in the idea of having an afair... I spose dreams and fantasies arn't just for us singles out here.

    keep groovin.


  • poeticweaver
    October 21, 2003
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    Great Job

    Wow Carrie, me thinks you have one heck of an imagination, therefore this leaves the reader in a wonderland that you've created, and gives many out there a spark if they ever needed one for sure, this should of done just that, heehee! ~Smiles~

    One excellent written story!
    -Timothy

  • Jonathan Wikkins
    October 21, 2003
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    well, if you feel it needs polishing, go ahead, and be sure and let me know when you get that done, this is incredible, sensual, warm, loving, sexy, hot, etc etc...

    and if polishing makes it better... well....

    go for it!

    many blessings

    mike


  • maryannde
    October 20, 2003
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    Carrie...thi s was incredible! Damn... I enjoyed the hell out of this! It felt completely real. And its the kind of fantasy that I would have had.

    If this was a first story write.. You really did it well.

    Hugs and... damn girl...you need to write some more!
    Mary Ann
    Edited on Oct 20, 11:42 p.m. because ''.

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