back from the forest i see him comming now1
a deer is hanging over his rippled shoulders2
he will be pleased with his hunt i am sure3
as he walks through the door i see the long scar 4
it was put there long ago5
in a time before the world was old6
a great battle he fought in to recieve his curse7
my love is young, yet old at heart8
i know not how many eras he has seen9
nor how many more he shall weather10
all i know is i love him11
despite his oddities12
a wicked curse is apon him13
he cannot age14
for a wicked man put it there15
so i'll stay with him forever 16
until the day i die 17
true loves hold cannot seem to be cruel18
when i am with him 19
so in that way i will always live....inside my love20
for eternity21
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back from the forest i see him comming now
a deer is hanging over his rippled shoulders
he will be pleased with his hunt i am sure
as he walks through the door i see the long scar
it was put there long ago
in a time before the world was old
a great battle he fought in to recieve his curse
my love is young, yet old at heart
i know not how many eras he has seen
nor how many more he shall weather
all i know is i love him
despite his oddities
a wicked curse is apon him
he cannot age
for a wicked man put it there
so i'll stay with him forever
until the day i die
true loves hold cannot seem to be cruel
when i am with him
so in that way i will always live....inside my love
for eternity
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Ooooh, 16, hun this is excellent! Muah!
Lol. It reminded me a lot of a native spritual story thing. I'm really into history and stuff. Well, more into native spiritual things... I'm into a lot of spiritual things... I find it so deep, and so facsenating. Like greek gods, and stuff. If you're into that stuff, like i am, Hidden World by Alison Baird would be an excellent book for you!
Over and Out.
.x. peace out liek the hippies of old school .x. -
i don't get it fully it was just in my head...i hope yall see some sort of beauty in it! this was really a quick write and i don't know if it is that good....i can hope that it appeals to some on eout there!
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