Chapter One1
Chamar Jones and her best friend Jenny Kate's attend River High prep school. They both attend Doctor.Watts creative writing class. Our Doctor Watts is not your ordinary teacher. He comes to the school with no former training at all. 2
Among the students, many of them were spreading rumors about his past, some say he had an underground operation selling drugs to the black market, others believe he was a spy for the French government. The only background the school knows of is that he was in the French Foreign legion. The students never had the nerve, to just go up to him and ask him where he had come from, because the students were scared of him. His class is one of the hardest to pass, and you must pass it to get out of high school. 3
Fourth period was their creative writing class with Doctor Watts. We enter the class with Doctor Watts starting explaining to days plans.4
" Good afternoon we are going to write a fantasy story which will be a hundred points, and the story will be due in forty-eight hours... " said Doctor Watts. 5
"Along with this you will be reading your stories to the class, and if any of them start off boring you will be repeating the class in summer school, so please make the story have humor and also, make sure that it has a plot to the tale "said Doctor Watts. 6
"So would you pick your teammate and let's start." said Dr.Watts 7
Gratefully the bell rang to end the day. Jenny and Chamar got together over the weekend to Finnish the story. On Monday, in fourth period most of the class had a scared look on their faces, and was wondering if there stories had what was as of them, so they would have to repeat the course in summer school. Doctor Watts enters the class and begins with Chamar and Jenny. The girls walk to the front of the class and began to tell the tale.8
On a mountain top in the Swiss Alps was the layer of the colorless.The leader of the group was Dr.Watts a crazy chocolate loving scientist, who plans is to suck out all the color in the world. His henchmen were inside getting the system set up. "Jentois where is my list"? order Dr.Watts 9
Right here Sir I was just looking over the list and making sure all the plans are in place." said Jentois. 10
Jentois is Dr. Watts right hand man, she may be a girl but she's mean as a snake, she is not to be cross, Jentois is the eyes and ears of the center. She reports to Dr.Watts with every thing she sees and hears.11
" So are we all in order Jentois?" asked Dr.Watts.12
" Yes Sir we have all our top guys on it. They are going to inform Santiago when each machine is in place". answered Jentois. 13
Santiago is the head of communication, he's a man of few words and he has a black belt in marshal art,14
" Dr. Watts news just in. the machines are in place we will be ready in forty eight hours. said Santiago. 15
Just then a big fat black rat ran across the floor, Dr.. Watts screams 16
"AHHHHHHH " And flys on the table and yells17
" Jentois KILL THE RAT !!!!!!" 18
"Oh you are such a baby Watts get over it, it's just a rat" Jentois yells at him as she traps the rat in her hands and throws it into the fire place.19
"Ok its dead, you can come down now" said Jentois.20
"OOO I hate rat's" said Dr, Watts. as he got down from the table then runs over to the fire place to see if indeed the rat is dead.21
Oh yes, Dr.Watts is afraid of rats. It started when he was young and living on their farm in Jersey, his brother would shoot a flaming rat at at him every time he found one. Dr. Watts was a country boy, he would milk the cows and then go and sit on a stump and eat chocolate late at night so now-one would see, he was never aloud to eat candy, it always made him hyper. so he was a good boy during the day and bad at night, but one night he ran into Jentois and they ran off together, she made him into the rat fearing chocolate lover evil minded man that he is. Now they are trying to drain the world of its color. 22
Among the laboratory we also have Jentu, who has only been with them for a year, she is Jentois' aid. Jentu is in charge of handling the location of future operation, plus has contacks with high government officials who are on Dr, Watts black mail list. With her is their maid Joy. Who spends her time eating soy nuts but never really cleaning, mostly she spends her time getting stoned and passing out from all the wine she drinks. Joy is the undercover team. She would go to the darks part of the earth to get information for the colorless team. 23
The only enemy of the colorless is the OA Agents with their leader Sani, with his team of Agents. Jack Golden is on the top of Dr,Watts hate list. Jack is always ending Dr.Watts plans. The OA Agents are sitting around the table waiting for Sani to give them a plan of action to stop Dr.Watts. Sani enters the room and begging to speak,24
"Ok man we have a major scene going on hear. Dr Watts has set up color-sucker device all over his mountain, we need you Jack and your team of Agents to go and stop this mad man." said Sani25
"Sir how do we disable the devices?" asked Jack. all of a sudden then the ceiling opened up and Joy fell threw and hit the table. Dazed and stoned, she stumbled off the table, and before she got her gun out, the OA Agents surrounded her. 26
Sani yells " TAKE HER TO THE BRIGE.,.. AND ROBBY STAND GUARD. Don't let her out of your site" 27
"And Robby when she comes around see if you can get any information out of her." said Sani28
Robby drags Joy down to the brig and the OA Agents continue their briefing. 29
"now I wont you Jack to take your team and get up to Dr. Watts hideout and hang low their. said Sani 30
But Sir, there is snow up there, You know I am scared of the snow" wined Jack. 31
Sani grabs Jack buy the neck and slapping him in the face saying,32
"Get a hold of yourself man. You are the only one that can save the world from becoming black and white."33
" So what if you where attacked by the Abominable Snowman."34
small laughter broke out in the room. 35
"Hey shut up guys" said Jack." You saw him, he was hitting me with snowballs over and over again." Jack wined 36
Sani gives them a warning look. 37
"I Know, " but I need you to stay up there, so when we have the information on how to disable the guns we can contact you."38
" Do I make myself clear ?" asked Sani. 39
taking a deep breath Jack nodded.40
" Yes Sir I understand. Now team gather your paintball guns and lets head out". said Jack.41
The team was made up of the finest Agents, there was Marty Smart, Jacob Smart, and Tim Air. The team gathered their guns and headed for the Swiss mountains. 42
Back at the Colorless HQ Dr.Watts is walking around the center with his battle axe listening to Barry Manalow. Just then a alarm went off. There seems to be a combination lock on Dr. Watts candy room door. 43
" Until I have the combination to the lock we are going to square up." said Dr. Watts 44
Raging mad he ordered all the henchmen go to their station and begin to square up, squaring up is a method use to get the right measurement, for any size of paper you would like to use. But it comes with a price, you may go mad trying to master it, the colorless have lost many agents to the madness, so beware of the words square up.45
After squaring for five hours Jentois finally screams.46
" I cant take this any more, all right here is the combination you freak ! " 47
"The number is six six six. now can we stop this crap and get back to work".48
" Don't you ever do that again" yelled Dr.Watts. He ran to the candy room door and fighting with the combination got it open and went inside and closed the door... 49
In the Brig lays Joy she was siting and waiting for Robby to integrate her. Robby comes in to the room holding a wine bottle half full. 50
" So Joy tell me the way to shut down those colorsucker machines " ordered Robby51
" Like hell I will. and you can't make me so there" Joy said and then she stuck out her tongue at him. 52
" Oh really, then I am going to shave your head if you don't tell me".said Robby 53
" You are bluffing" said Joy54
He healed up the razor and shaving cream and along with rope to tie her down with. 55
" Now tell me"! Robby yelled at her.56
Shaking with fear Joy tells him.57
"You have to unplug the main machine which is in the center of Dr. Watts Candy room , the plug is under the Chocolate carving of Elif Tower in the far left counter. ." Joy said crying .58
" Thank you, now was that so hard.?" asked Robby.59
" Here have some wine to wash down your betrayal." Robby said and gives her the wine 60
Joy takes the wine, not knowing it was poisoned she drinks it down, then gasps for air and trys to get out of the room, but passes out before she gets to the door, 61
Robby walks out of the room leaving her laying there and goes to contact 62
Sani so they can give Jack the information and bring down the colorless.63
"Sir, Sir, we have the information to take down the machines " side Robby64
"Good work Robby send the word on to Jack and tell him to move in right a way." said Sani. 65
Robby informs Jack with the plans. Jack and his men start to move out. 66
" Oh Sir what should I do with her body?" asked Robby. 67
" What do you mean her body? And who are you referring to?" asked Sani68
" Joy Sir, I poisoned her with the wine." answered Robby.69
" You what, why the hell did you do that for."Sani asked him with hand on his hips. 70
" I wasn't gong to, she was being a brat, and sir she stuck her tongue out at me, and I hate that so mush." said Robby as he past the floor like a expecting father.71
"Robby were the good guys here, we don't kill people, it not in our code." said Sani72
" Oh, I must have miss that part when I was reading our handbook am sorry sir, so what do you wont me to do with her then? " asked Robby.73
" I don't know, why don't you put her in a bag, and send her back to the colorless, and let them deal with her." answered Sani angrily 74
"Ok, Oh buy the way do you have the Address?" asked Robby. Sani just look at him, " I don't Know look under evil mad scientist in the phone book." said Sani. 75
"Oh right why didn't I thank of that". said Robby.76
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Back at the Colorless laboratory Dr. Watts is getting ready to firer the guns. When Santiago cam to him with the body bag that had Joy stuff in it. Dr.Watts looks down at Joys face and tells the team to gather around. They brought her body down to their underground river of acid. They say a few parting words and Dr. Watts drops Joys body into the acid river. The body bag sank like a stone and with a hiss of smoke the river returns to its clam state.78
"I didn't think her body would have sink that fast" said Jentois79
"Yes it must be from all the wine she drinks she was turning into a Bloded cow, I'm glad she's gone the OA Agents save me the headache of killing her myself, she was whiney brat" said Dr. Watts 80
They left the underground river and headed back up to laboratory to see to the plans of placing the colorsucking guns on line. 81
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On the showy mountain top Jack and his agents got the call from Robby to inform him that the main plug is in Dr. Watts candy room under the Eilf Tower in the far left counter. Just as Jack was standing up to yell to his agents a rain storm of snow ball came falling down on him. Jack dives to the ground and starts to suck his thumb and rock bake and forth. JessM came running up and looked down at him with a smile on her face.83
"Nice,, some great Leader you are man, scared of a snow ball fight." She laugh at him and ran back to the other. 84
"NOT FUNNY YOU GUYS" LETS MOVE IN WE HAVE THE ORDER. Jack yelled at them and they gather their gear and started to move the snow to uncover the rocky base of the mountain, their they found an opening.85
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Back in the laboratory the colorless where all place at their stations the gun where in place to start draining the world of this color.87
"Now that the guns are online we can begin to suck the color from this plant. said Dr.Watts88
"Jentois are you ready?" Asked Dr.Watts. no answer came. 89
"Jentois , JENTOIS" yell Dr. Watts.90
" Where the Hell is Jentois "He turned and asked the team.? 91
" Sir I believe she is in the bathroom". answer Jentu. 92
" Oh fine we are about to take over the world, and we all to have to stop because Jentois has to empty her balder." Dr. Watts said with blazing eyes . 93
"Then fine we will stop until Jentois gets back." said Dr..Watts 94
"But sir why do we have to stop?" asked Jentu 95
"Because she has the key to turn on the guns so we can drain this world of its color." screamed Dr.Watts. The colorless pace back and forth for an hour before Jentois get back from the bathroom, Dr. Watts came over to her and slapped her in the face.96
"The next time you are going to take and pee brake let me know, we are trying to take over this world hear and we are not going to stop for you to empty out your balder. GOT THAT JENTOIS? Dr Watts yelled and slapped her again. 97
Jentois nodded at him and as Dr. Watts was moving away Jentois raise her left fist and slams Dr. Watts in the jaw, Dr. Watts falls to the floor,98
"YES I GOT IT, THE NEXT TIME YOU SLAP ME I WILL KILL YOU, YOU GOT THAT YOU FRECK. Jentois yelled at him with rage.99
Just as Dr. Watts was getting off the floor and trying to gain his balance from Jentois blows, the ceiling of the laboratory opened up and Jack and the OA Agents comes flying in, they start pulling out their paintball guns, and open fire on them. The Colorless dived under the table, and they as well started pull out their own paintball guns . It was a all-out paintball war. Every color of the rainbow was covering the walls and on the Agents as well.100
Jack and Dr.Watts runs to his candy room and throws the tower of chocolate aside and they started to fight with each other, Jack kicks Dr.. Watts in the leg and he fall to the ground , Jack runs to the counter and pulls the plugs out, the OA agents have the Colorless Team in a corner, they have given up, Jack stop's to looks around,Dr. Watts was no where to be found 101
Tim go fined him and bring him back here ordered Jake. 102
Tim run to go look for him. he comes bake. "He is no where to be found sir and even Jentois is gone". Said Tim,103
" Did you look in the bathroom?" Jack asked. 104
" Yes sir I did she was not there sir." answer Tim.105
"Oh Just wonderful, Get a APB out on them right away, we will find them. The world is depending on it." said Jack106
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The story was finished Jenny and Chamar was asked to sit down and with no questions asked. 108
"Very good girls you pass." Said Doctor Watts. 109
The bell rang and class ended for the day. The next day Doctor Watts was not there. but a woman was in his seat for once in their life time they have a sub. 110
"Good Afternoon class Doctor Watts will not be returning" Said the woman. The class cheered with joy know they wold never see him again. 111
"Ok class. I'll be tacking over for now on. My Name is Jentois." A Gasp entered the air. Jenny and Chamar went white. 112
"Now is there a Jenny and Chamar here today". asked Jentois 113
Jenny and Chamar slowly rase their hands. "Oh good would you two come up here I have something for you. said Jentois. Jenny and Chamar walk over to her and Jentois handed them a letter. they open the letter and inside was just a few words114
BE AFRAID ,BE VERY AFRAID 115
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pretty cool write. I thought this was very cleverly written. I was really fasinated by your characters. Thanks for entering this.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 4, dialog: 2, characters: 5.

