Chapter I – II Carceres1
Ethan walked with Samantha down the repetitive hallways towards the dining hall, or at least that’s what he assumed, he really had no idea where they were going. There was a silence between them so he decided to break the silence and not to let a good opportunity go to waste.2
“What subjects are you taking?” he said as they rounded yet another corner.3
“Physics, Sociology and Philosophy,” she answered curtly, “what about you?” Ethan laughed as he herd her list her subjects. “What?” She looked up at him raising an eyebrow4
“Oh, nothing.” He said composing himself but grinning broadly, “I have Physics, Art and Philosophy.” He laughed again at the though, here he was standing next to the most beautiful creature he had ever laid eyes on and they had two of their three subjects together, life couldn’t get much better! They continued walking down the monotonous hallways until they reached an open set of antique and heavily used double doors.5
The double oak doors leading into the hall were studded with large iron bolts and iron handles, the dark, stained wood showing age and every knot. The dining hall was a long room with a low vaulted ceiling; it was ornate much like the rest of the school. The odd thing was the high-tech kitchen facilities running along one side of the hall, beyond lead into the kitchens. Across from the counter and the kitchen were several stained glass windows; the hall might have been a chapel before its current incarnation.6
Samantha showed Ethan to the queue and they got lunch together, they sat at the end of a long table full of students eating, talking, and larking about. They had been eating and talking for twenty minuets when Ethan plucked up the courage to ask her, “Do you have a boyfriend?” Samantha looked up from her plate, her emerald green eyes looking straight into his silver ones, he felt stupid as soon as the last syllable rolled off his tongue. “Sorry, forget I asked.” He said backtracking. She swallowed her mouthful of salad and looked in his eyes again as she answered him.7
“I…”8
Author notes
this is shit IMO coz i wrote it at 3 in the mornin but hey wdf lol thnx to all it will be edited lengthened and edited some more 
Rae
OK updated and edited a lot better IMO and not that many changes just improve mets to grammar and other stuff lol
HNB
Rae V
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nope nope! Not shit at all! Very very good! Rock it out!
One love,
Kitty xx -
KOOL!! thnx sis ur such a babe
HNB
Rae V -
I don't think this is shit. It's far from shit. I promise. This story is kickin and I'm loving everything about it.
HNB
Always and Forever,
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u bloody better add more otherise i will suffocate you *sky re-thinks* but if i do that, then you wont be able to write...hmmm, i aint gonna win this am i? oh well, nice write babe, edit when you can! l8az love ur lil sis sky xxxxxxx
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Aww im sorry, but it had to be done i need atleast on cliffhanger in my story to keep people interested and im not decided wich rout it takes yet because the storyline would only change slightly ither way so.... its as much of a cliff hanger for me as it is for you lol
Rae
PS plz dont suffocate me there will be more
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Yeh i know i was babysitting my parents lol as weird as it sounds but yeh more asap
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LMAO you have to wait till this is edited first
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Yup lol
Rae -
Hun this was great, It was very good, Wonderful, And Im so pissed that you left me off there, Lol. I want more more more, Well does she or not, My mind wanders at the thought it could be sweet with no I dont and they get together, Or down the darker road sadder road, Yes she does and he watches her with pain. Hmm.... Where will you take up Rae. Always making me think, You know my mind aches,lol
Great write hun, Wonderful, Keep it comming, If you stop here I will have to suffocate your ass
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yeh it's really good, and you just had to put that cliff hanger on the end didn't you! Anyway really good, cant' wait to see what you can write in teh more sociable hours of the day!
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*agrees with lizzie* not shit......i can see myself gettin addicted to yet another story *sighs*. Can't wait for the next installment ^^
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lol not shit but some spelling mistakes me thinks...good write though just needs to be checked as you know...
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