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Have you ever had an epic thought?2
A thought that encompassed all the beauty3
Love, hope, and purity in the universe?4
A thought so beautiful5
You caught your breath as it swept over you6
And you had a flash7
Of inspiration, of perfect serenity8
A curtain lifted and you could see past all evil 9
To the glory of tomorrow10
A moment of contentment so perfect11
You felt life could not get anything better than this12
And you had to share it?13
This is one of those moments.14
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- You, Yourself...and Being Philosophical by TyShade.
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This piece is amazing, I love how you can transcend the powerful force and intensity of epic force while remaining so calm and grounded in the realm of words! Thanks for reading my story!
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Very Serene
This was calming. Was this your own thought? I'm so tired of wondering where people get things like this to type out for people like me to read? I really do like to read this stuff. I'm just... jealous that people write really good stuff that's absolutely amazing to read. It just inspires you to learn how to write like that and come up with great ideas. If you have any pointers that I might be lucky enough to use, please mail me them. I would love to learn. One day I will learn to write calming, thoughtful stories. Just like you.
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This is good. very good
i liked it. do you write poems often?
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That was amazing! I really liked it. Also, the backround you have makes me feel happy and help set a mood. Overal, I loved it! I hope to read more of your work soon!
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*Shakes head*
You, overly talented writer, you. Can you stop writing good stuff? I mean, it kind of raises the bar for the others. Seriously, this piece was wonderful! You have such simple expressions that makes your poetry so inviting! I mean, I don't have to get a hard time trying to figure out what's happening; it's blunt, yet beautiful and deep. I loved how this poetry could be interpreted as an "epic thought" being what pushed you to write -The Epic Thought-. Plus it expresses wonderfully what we feel before writing, which often is a difficult thing to narrow down. GOOD WOOORK. !!
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