Blades of Tribulation

Drawn from the pits of the nine hells Mihpares was called1

Feeling the HaPpInEsS of the over world drew him to the surface2

His blades flow from sheaths crafted from the finest baby skin3

His body drawn of human perfection thousands of battles written on his face4

Grooves filled with the finest of runes adorn his twin blades5

One crimson and seeming to sing when covered in blood6

The other ebony and a howling heard when it flows into the flood7

Bodies hit the ground at his feet, headless armless and many other states8

But the gods help you if he needs information from you or youre the subject of his humor9

Hours of agony fill your final hours pain agony10

New definitions these words gain and never will you fall into a stupor.11

Hell keep you alive for months on end, and your spells mean nothing12

There is but one way to stop this monstrous creation13

But youll be hard pressed to find the siren that has enchanted him14

Beauty to be sure, but a beast in her own right and always filled with deceit15

Ebon Hair adorns them both her long him a mohawk.16

Runic tattoos of power run his entire body, though none have seen under his armor save the dying and his weakness.17

Finely crafted chain mail is his armor of choice, with no helm thats seen18

His blades of hate and thirst the finest of katanas.19

His razor tail he uses like a third blade and has been known to shred the finest of plate mail.20

If you take him on without his weakness in hand it is recommended that many many strong warriors join you21

Take no mages or wizards for they will be last to die as he laughs at theyre spells.22

He travels on wings the color of his hair.23

They retract into his back leaving their painful mark and appear at a moments notice.24

Author notes

thought youd like an enemy who was a quest in and of himself just to find his weakness let alone aquire it and then face him, and if youre wondering about the name look in a mirror




Mihpares=seraphiM
seraphim=the chior of angels best known for micheal the angel with the flaming sword

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  • sidewinder
    June 26, 2005
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    'I too have missed your friendship...your wit...your comments that you... unique..have made!
    I was gone awhile myself...made a new move to texas...and didn't have access to the net...but I'm back with a vengence
    Bill


  • vampira1665
    June 22, 2005
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    Wow, that was intense. Reminds me of a friend that once spoke of nothing but the Arch Angel Michael. This guy sounds very impressive and one more thing, I have to agree with BloodRoses, not sure you really talk with anyone anymore. Sad, we miss ya. Hope the plans are coming along nicely.

    Hugs and bites, vampira1665

  • BloodRoses
    June 16, 2005
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    sweetness
    would say alot more but you wouldnt respond to me anyway b/c we never talk anymore
    laters love
    Me