katina(anorexia) part 3

so the four of them chatted and she realized just then that mike was coming over.1

"yes" she siad out loud2

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  • BlooQKazoo
    July 8, 2005
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    shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhort! i like these - ive been reading them...hmmm....i think to make it look more professional, you need to go through and check spellings and grammer and shit - im so picky about that with stories. im put off if it has bad grammer but i really like this and i think you should carry this on
    polly xxx

  • MissCassie
    July 6, 2005
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    mmmm hmmm... how do i get to your bio? ~blushes deep red now~

  • EmsandAbs
    July 6, 2005
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    well my stories are off cause i havent paid much attention to them sorry if you dont get them

  • MissCassie
    July 6, 2005
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    this part is confusing but ill go on to the next part see if it helps me!


  • ForgottenxMe
    July 3, 2005
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    i dont get it, but whatever. ill role with the flow. good story so far
    ~nerny

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