eye lashes for wishes, love & anarchy

Hypnotized by sex appeal1

Hands move to feel2

Tongues twist like vines3

Examining our signs4

Without muttering a word5

I forgot everything I’ve heard6

Couldn’t recall what I said7

No more thoughts through my head8

Life on autopilot9

Just letting things go…10

All the problems just blow11

Away in the wind12

Life,13

Ablaze in anarchy14

We stand in the ashes15

Eye lashes for wishes16

Begging for kisses17

Mornings for my misses

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  • Izzles
    March 9

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    This is a really moving piece. I am not very good a reading poetry...the way that it requires more analysis to understand has always evaded me. But, this piece was lovely. I thought that it was very evoctive both visually and emotionally. Well done! I'm sure you will, indeed, be famou one day. Am I the first to like you?