It was the same old day it was monday everyone was tired and hungry not anough breakfest we walked to school slowly and the teachers were angry all the time at us for being late we hated school we start at nine not 8.20 oh well at least we get to sleep in class science was boring the teacher never stopped talking like always maths was alright a bit except for the talking and showing maths programs which take hours lunch was ok the food is gross after school we have snacks and partys we love after school sleeping swimming eating thats the life for me and my friends but one night it happened it was water bomb nigt where ever you are you get wet and with cold morning water from the pool and everyone runs into my secret underground house just the people in rata dorm we stay there for the term and it's really couzy we watch tv till 12.00 then go to sleep we wake up in the morning have showers and go to school at 8.15 we had the greatest time at school not sure why but we went swimming all day that was weird usally we have to sit in class watch the teachers eat ice blocks while we are sitting working and nothing to drink this is a gay school we hated it we need to get out of here so we looked to see if there were any secret areas to the attic no body goes up there we can hide there for a while so we looked maninhouse window is open we climbed threw and ran up stairs to the attic and work out which room was who's and teresa was in my room she gets scared and rachel martha weren in the last room on the left we made some tea and went to bed it was really quiet up here then i heard a noise i looked into the bathroom a dead body lies in there with no movement or sound rachel was in the shower wait a second there is no shower up here i pulled back the curtian and saw blood shower water someone must have there p.... ok nothing to worry about i turned of the shower and went back to bed in the morning we were all dead who did this what's that ahhhhhhhhhhh...... it was a ghost it sliced us up and blood poored all over main house up stairs and now no one will ever know what happened to the kids who skipped school and died the ghost haunt every house in solway college except for the haunted science lab that was another story ..........
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really good
it was really scarybeginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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now im going to write haunted science room.
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