Todd went back to bed after the night he had just had he knew he would sleep for nights.1
Todd had met a girl yet again. LIke he cared anymore like anyone did. He had no one. HE had gone away from home after that night with his incounter with a beautiful young woman who was nothing but a fake.2
HE was only 19 but was turned in to a vampire. 100 years later there he was decieving young girls to get what he wanted.3
He woke up many nights later not wanting to recall what had happened.4
He decieded that he needed to go clubbing. nOt just any clubbing Vampire clubs. 5
when he got there he was let in faster than anyone else. Posers got to go in last.6
That night while he was talking to his friends he saw a mortal pass by. She looked different. He asked around who she was. No one knew. She was new. 7
"be right back.... or not" he said to his friends and they new what would happen next.8
"hey love" Todd said to her in a sultry voice9
"hey"she said back. she was taken aback he was bautiful not just cute beautiful. she had never described a guy in that way. 10
"so your new?" and the conversation went from there11
Later when it was time to feed of her he couldn't. HE loved her beauty everything about her. Gosh so he just did it and told her to be back here tomorrow. As he walked back to his friends so he could leave before the sun came up he couldn't stop thinking about her. Now what would he do.......12
Author notes
Ok i dont write stories that well so this is something i needed to do to see if i would write a better one if it a was contest one
What did you think? Please comment!
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Interesting story. There are a few spelling, grammatical and typing errors.
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There's a picture of a prince with a sword and icy eyes at the top of the contest. You were supposed to write a story inspired by the picture.
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thanka for the comment but i'm kinda slow today so what do you mean bye prince sutff?
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I hadn't thought of the prince in the picture being a vampire prince, but I suppose it's possible. That being the case you have taken the story in a totally new and fascinating direction. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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