Todd prolugue

as todd sat by the water bot daring to touch it he rememebre that cold december night almost 100 years ago he cried.Blood tears.1

That cold night he had met a girl. Not a girl she was more than that, he could tell. her beautiful pale skin. 2

He could remember everything about her.Her skin, her laugh, her smile, everyhting. he rememebre seeing her in his dreams.but that one night he saw her. He was only 19 she seemed 21.3

She sudeced him. That night evrything changed for him. Her love was for his blood, not him. he felt betrayed and lost.... Yet he did not know what happened until later on 3 years later. when he looked not a day older.4

After 5 years people noticed that he had not changed one bit. He ran away. Far FAr away. he knew he was a vampire and had feed of people many times. he still felt a tug of guilt.5

He ran and ran. he would sleep eat and lseep he did nothing but that for about 60 years. he didn't know the outside world. now it was 1965. He staterd living again. well as much livign as dead being could do.6

He had now moved to chicago and felt way to out of place so he moved again.....7

just the ntodd heard a movement nad he knew that it was time for his kill....8

He then moved to  vermont and laid there until 1980 and the nmoved to new york ......9

he had just made another kill this time it was some stupid guy that was trying to rape a girl so now he had made his kill tiem ot go to bed.......10

he had satryed in New york and made friends vampire friends......11

It was now 2005 and he went back to vermont for a couple of years and now he was back at new york 2005 so long ago it seemed yet so near....12

Author notes

well ppls if you read this and it seems a little not dow ni went to sleep ok pplz i need coments cuasei actually want ot make this in tersing i wil ltry to make the vampires aas real as possible i will read mroe about them

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  • EmsandAbs
    June 16, 2005
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    i dont know its just that i need to write a story and nothing i do seems to get my attention so i dont know
    -emz


  • June 16, 2005
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    it was good...