Desire

He pulled me into his warm comforting embrace, his gaze intense and sultry, time and space stood still as his warm spicy scent engulfed my nostrils and his body heat penetrated through my skin.

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    October 13
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    Good paragraph! Very descriptive. Is this going to continue?

    Keep writing!

    Rian


    • nahomie
      October 13
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      no, sadly. This was for a context. thanx for the comment.