~I don't believe in eternal love because my love for you will forever grow and eternally change.~
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My first love 'is' also my childhood friend and we will be married in June!!! ^^
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- Another sentence contest from ~T~ by TNTrouble.
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Thats so beautiful.
omg! Congradulations! Thats so special
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I like the concept behind your words; it touches on a concept I think a lot of the mainstream romance media forgets: that love takes effort. Great job, I really enjoyed this sentence!
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Interesting concept and very good job. Congrats on your first love and how it turned out as well. Thanks for entering.
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Any significance of the quotation marks on Is? And I agree to the quote. It does change a bit, doesn't it? Although eternal-love kinda encompasses this factor...
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Thanks for taking your time and interest to read my sentence!
The quotes...not much meaning...force of habit. Seriously I didn't even notice it until you pointed it out. I often put these (~) to signify I made a quote in some other work. So it kinda just put themselves in there without my conscious knowing. (Hmm...interesting yet creepy at the same time)
As for the quote I was thinking since my love for her will change every time then I am actually loving her differently everyday which breaks the past love I had for her and creates a new one. So in a sense my love for her is not eternally constant but forever changing...Which puts it back to square one in some ways...(Add sweatdrop here)
Also I have another habit of making quotes that contradict itself and kinda go in an unending thinking loop process...especially when it comes to love. Since my own simple belief about love is "Love is screwed"
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