A Second Chance

Take me down when you go1

So I can see what you don’t show2

In your eyes, are they all lies?3

Or do you really know?4


I didn’t want it to be this way5

I want you here, just...please stay6

What if I said i’m sorry?7

What more is there to say?8


I don’t know if I can deal with this9

What if I forget your kiss?10

To forget would be worse than remembering11

All the things I’m going to miss12


Take me down when you go13

So then I can finally know14

How you feel, I just can’t deal15

When you refuse to show16


I’ll never forget your face17

Or your comforting embrace18

It was the best, my head, your chest.19

I won’t forget your taste.20


Just remember that I love you21

When you do what you do22

Alone here, an empty tear23

Pointless...but, for you24


Don’t walk out that door25

My heart’s already torn26

From the hurt of your curt words27

Caused it to hurt me more28


Take me down when you go...29

You know what?30

Forget it31

You’re not worth it

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  • Non Paix
    March 8

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    Great write, cool rhyming pattern as well, veering from the usual aabb or abab pattern to more of an aaba, which is different, but works. You can tell it was writen with a lot of emotion, and it came out great

  • fire wolf
    March 6
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    This is somewhat how I feel about Ice, except, we were friends, not boyfriend and girlfriend.