She Stands Alone - Chapter 13

There was really no way for this to be possible in Michaels mind.  Marie would never cheat on him, or at least he didnt think so.1

"You're sure she was pregnant!?  Couldn't there be a mistake?  Please tell me it isn't true!", Michael pleaded with the doctor.2

"There could be but I am almost certain that she was pregnant.  I couldn't mistake that.  I am sorry, Michael.", said the doctor.3

So many thoughts and possibilities running through his mind at this point.  He knew that this wasn't possible yet it was true.  Maybe this had something to do with what Marie was going to tell him before she lost consciousness.  Was that what it was?  He didn't want to wait to find out what was going on.  He had to find out.4

"Is she going to pull through this, and if you don't know what are the chances of her pulling through?  Can you find out who the father of the baby was?  Can you tell me anything besides the fact that she was pregnant?", Michael rambled on without giving the doctor time to say anything at all.5

"I don't know anything yet.  I can look into things and let you know what I can as I go along.", said the doctor.6

"Thank you."7

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  • Romantic1
    June 20, 2005
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    yeah this is a good job i love the work it makes me want to post my story but i am not sure about it i am making a novel and then turn it in to a novel so that it would be a good romantic true life story movie which will make any romantic movie put to shame lol well i wish but yeah nice story i love them all


  • MYownFreedom
    June 17, 2005
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    Well...I had to reveiw...been a while ...But glad to see you started writing on this again....you are really doing a great job with this story hun...keep up the great work Mom