Prey

Her seluate  in the covered window was a temptation that nagged at his brain. He had waited a long time for this moment. He was finally going to get what he longed for the most. 1

" And to think" he thought grinning in spite of himself " It started with a glance."2

6 months earlier3

*Ring* *Ring*4

" Natasha can you get that please?" Tamra Willinger called from the shower.5

No answer. *Ring* *Ring*6

" NATASHA GET THE PHONE" Tamra yelled.7

Still no answer. *Ring* *Ring*8

She got out of the shower swearing under her breath as she wrapped herself in a towel, then ran to answer the phone. 9

" Hello?"10

*click* 11

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  • Grozny
    April 19
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    Creepy.

  • Tumbleweed
    June 15, 2005
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    Very creepy, especially for being so short. Great job, thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
    By the way, spreadingdark is right:
    "seluate" ~ should be silhouette.

  • spreadingdark
    June 15, 2005
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    Wow...very creepy. I like this a lot, the title says it all. Deliciously disturbing, and I'm sure this actually happens and stuff, which makes it even scarier. Good luck in the contest

    ~SD~

    P.S. spellingwise, "silhouette" is how you spell the 2nd word, I think.