Emily part one (bulimia)

well it was my first  at swim practice on a new team.1

No one new me so i guess that sucked. I talked to coach Kelly. Kelly was one of those cool coaches with cool blond hair piercings and was like 21 years old she was awesome.2

"Emily get to that lane" i got into the little kids lane.3

"OK Kelly but i don't think i should be here..." i said she cut me of4

"i dint care what you think get in there and swim"5

i did was i was told. I saw this one girl looking at me. She was Blond and about my age i remember seeing her at nationals when i went last year. i wasn't swimming in that meet i didn't have the times. Everyone knew her but who cares.6

I started swimming  and then Kelly started to move me up lanes. SO that was her game. so i swam faster and faster. eventually i was in That girls lane. she seemed kinda down now that i was there. 7

"hey" i said but she didn't hear me. o well8

After the IM set i got out out talk to Kelly and asked her about the girl.9

"hey Kelly is that girl Katina Richardson"10

"yeah she is how did you know that"11

"i was at nationals last year and remembered her"12

"hey Emily get into lane one i wanna see how you do there. GO last OK"13

"yeah sure Kelly"14

so i went there i got in and i heard that Katina girl screech "o my gosh"15

as she went off i started to laugh and her lane looked at me very strangely.16

Gosh i was swimming with the boys i pasted one and i was happy.17

after practice was over and i got in my brothers car waiting for him someone ran after me.18

"hey you on the team right" said this guy about 15 i think his name was Todd.19

"yeah" i said sheepishly in  a voice that resembled a boy going through puberty20

"my name is Todd i met your bro" my Boer that was original" and i was wondering if you would like to go over to my house with your bro" again with the bro i thought " and hang out"21

"why don't you ask him right now" i said when my brother Jake was coming22

" hey ....." they had guy talk23

Author notes

stil ltrying to write better stories its not thta great but o well who cares i write for me anyway

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  • Manic Poet
    August 11, 2005
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    WOOT WOOT! YEY BOTH SIDES! SOO COOL! KEEP IT UP

  • EmsandAbs
    July 6, 2005
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    thnaks for the comment i guess my swimming is good

  • MissCassie
    July 6, 2005
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    this is kewl, i guess u r a kik ass swimmer! ill read the next chapter i bet it rox XoXoX
    -Cassandra


  • ForgottenxMe
    July 3, 2005
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    i like this. now its not so switchy. now i know. so it goes back and forth on chapters, but htis is the thing, the aner and buli really dont come in.. i hope it does later. cuz this is a really nice chapter
    ~NERNY

  • Ashro
    June 15, 2005
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    Yeah...its comeing really good so far..i like your work

  • EmsandAbs
    June 15, 2005
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    thanks i think writing about the eating disoerders got more attention in the title
    -em

  • Ashro
    June 15, 2005
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    I like this story so far, i'll read the second part cause i really wanna know what happens!

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