What is out there?

Nothing. At least, for me.
I have seen good people
Work their ass off
And get nowhere.1

Lazy slobs
Get everything
Handed to them
On a silver platter.2

What kind of motivation
Is that?
Yea, I am gonna work hard
To get nowhere.3

Take the road less traveled
And set up shop.
Right there,
On the side of the road.
Well guess what,
You’re an idiot.
It’s the road less traveled.
You’re not gonna get
Much business.

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  • Violette silver member
    June 3
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    An odd poem, and yet sadly true. Thanx for writing and posting this.


  • SquirrelRaiders
    March 8

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    Ironic Truth

    Isn't that a bucket of shit that people who are lazy do really seem to get everything in the world given to them and those of us who struggle through life trying to make everything work just keep getting the short end of the stick. It's an interesting social concept and analysis. Good work.


  • Bells Kelly
    March 2

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    exzcellent. i see exacly what your talking about. but hey? what was the fun in making life easy?

    cheers
    Becca


  • tguilfoy
    March 1
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    funny yet so true...keep it up