“W ell , anywhere you want it to.” 1
H ighly esteemed 2
A ll knowing counselors say.3
M y life is doomed4
F ailure and nothing5
I s exactly what I 6
A m headed for.7
L ousy genetics, 8
T hat’s all, Pure and simple.9
H ardly your typical10
A ngry teen.11
T hat goes about12
S imply blaming life13
A nd normal shit on my genetics.14
L ack of example is all it really is15
L ust to better myself?16
N o.17
O nly the will18
T o simply trudge on.19
H ow long will that last?20
I don’t know.21
N ot much longer though.22
G uess they are right.23
E very road before me24
L eads on 25
S teadily to 26
E verywhere and yet nowhere.
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Nice.
I can see why you've won competitions. That was so cever, using a single letter to create every line. I think they actually have a special name for that but for the life of me, I cannot remeber what it is.
beginning: 5, language: 5, ending: 5.
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Interesting
That's very interesting you made a statement with the first letter of each line. This is a great piece, capturing your emotions in an instant and bringing your readers into your world.
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i love the way you wrote this girl!
good work
cheers
Becca
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good work
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