The Fallen Warrior Chapter 4-Special

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After Austin left, I helped my dad clean up the kitchen. I tried o avoid eye contact, I had a idea of what he wanted to talk about. Why I hated Austin. I was right.2

"Jamie, Austin seems nice, I thought you would like him," he said. I groaned.3

"I do dad, I just..."4

"You just what?" he voice got more serious, as he turned to face me.5

"Nothing," I put the last dish in the cabinet, and started toward the stairs, I really did not feel like talking about this. To my surprise, he followed me. "Um, what?"6

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"Can you be nice to him?"8

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"Yea, but why? Aren't I allowed to pick my own friends?" I was starting to get really annoyed.10

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"Honey, his parents said he doesn't have any friends."12

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"He just moved here, what did you expect?" by now I yelling, and I hated myself for yelling at him, but I felt I had to, for him to see my point.14

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He was silent for a moment, so I took the chance, and ran upstairs.16

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"Jamie, wait," hisvoicewas softer, so I listened.18

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"Yea?"20

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"I'd be friends with Austin."22

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I groaned again.24

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"Austin's special."26

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I looked at him and shook my head."You'll say anything to get me to be friends with him, I don't care if he's special! I don't care what he is!"28

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He started to say something, but I didn't want to hear it. I ran into my room, and locked the door. That was where I stayed for the rest of the night.30

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  • aww thats sad! keep writing tho its getting good!

  • lalala69
    July 1

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    good. typo. in line 2, you forgot the 't' in 'to' and in line 4, the first letter in 'dad' should be capitalized, line 5, should be 'his' not 'he' and some spacing problems in line 18. other than that, its good


  • lycanfreak1
    February 28
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    UGH! I NEED MORE! MORE MORE MORE!