Years formimg the circle1
Of joys and pains2
Forevers slipped tongue3
One is what remained4
Two equals one doesn't compute5
Rational struggles with love6
Habits dying old, newly7
Wed from up above8
A bitter soul, heart9
With a whole, now sings10
A new man, recycled11
With only, the ring 12
Author notes
I was re-married June 11th..yesterday
the transformation is much more than a circle of gold.
What did you think? Please comment!
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I love your stories, Muddy.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I offer my congratulations once more, my Friend...This is a beautiful penning, Muddy...rife with incredible imagery, smooth & pure flow, amazing imagery that holds great depths...Your sentiments reach out to the reader with a sense of urgency & trust...This is an impressive effort on your part...Thank you for sharing this part of yourself with us...Be well, Scribe...
Wanderer
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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congrats to you as well...Peace Muddy
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Wow....2 wins, 2 days in a row.....a marriage and a silver trophy. Congratulations on both.
Going in circles can be a great thing when you start from a loving wonderful place. Good luck in this lap, my friend.
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Awww... congratulations are definitely in order then and I do wish you and your bride many years of happiness and strength and love that surpasses all the obstacles that life could ever toss in your pathway. Having said all of that... This is beautiful piece. A new man... recycled. I like that. That appeals to me so well because I think we all have those moments of being "recycled" or at least we should have. Not necessarily as far as marriage goes, but as human beings in general who are ever growing and ever changing and ever evolving as we live and learn from life's lessons. Thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck!
♥ Kimberly
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