many times i sit1
and many times i stand2
somtime i get turned around3
and think that life is bland4
pretending things seem normal5
forgetting what i've done6
i'm the only one7
who can see through my two portals8
i think god is mortal9
so he can share my soul, instead10
you are made of energy11
so that means i can never be destroyed12
or dead13
or annoyed14
we are those people15
those people are us16
those people were life17
and in life we trust18
in life we must19
not question, just20
remember that21
we're made of dust22
space dust is grace dust23
that "oh no, she's late" dust24
lil wayne can not top meeeeee what
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lol awesome some poem, it a nice rhyme to it. I bet that lil wayne dude cant top you.
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Loved it!
I really like this- it's got so many subtle messages built together to make one big... I don't know, enjoyable kick in the arse? :]
I particularly liked:
who can see through my two portals (8)
i think god is mortal (9)
so he can share my soul, instead (10)
Very nicely written; the interesting rhyme scheme kept me interested.
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Very good use of rhyming .. Keep up to good work .
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good sentiments
18 and 19 2 life's.
Gotta like a poem about this stuff tho
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you are so right.
lil wayne could not top that shieeet.
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