My sisters Poems (1)

I'm sorry for this, but these are the poems that meant the most to me, my sister wrote them and they cut me to the bone.1

This one was to my little brother Talan, from my sister, it hurt me2

1. Sorry I cant be there.3

I am breaking down,4

I am falling apart.5

I am not there, it's your special day,6

it breaks my heart.7

I am on the ground.8

I have a broken heart,9

I can't be there, what can I say?10

Now all I feel is guilt.11

I am crying now12

I am not there for you13

It is your birthday, I'm sorry,14

I wish I could be there.15

___________________________________________________________________16

This one was to our Uncle Ben, who is MIA, actually he's nuts but we loved him.17

Uncle Ben18

My Uncle was the only one,19

To hold me when I cried.20

He would sit there,21

til my tears dried.22

We got a call from the police,23

there last words took my breath.24

I cried because I'll never know25

If he was beated to death.26

I can't believe,27

He left my side because of drugs28

He stole our things and ran away,29

and all I wanted were some hugs.30

He could be on the streets,31

I really don't want him to be alone.32

He is my uncle, no matter what,33

and matter what, we all need a home.34

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sorry if that broed u sotry reader, I just like em, and I usually hate poems

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  • These are really good. Keep the good work up.


  • GrimDeath
    February 27
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    they are good, and i can understand why they hit you hard.

  • it was good but it was sad

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • PrincessOfdarkness silver member
    February 25
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    awwww

    that's like i have no words...

    very touching

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.