I'm sorry for this, but these are the poems that meant the most to me, my sister wrote them and they cut me to the bone.1
This one was to my little brother Talan, from my sister, it hurt me2
1. Sorry I cant be there.3
I am breaking down,4
I am falling apart.5
I am not there, it's your special day,6
it breaks my heart.7
I am on the ground.8
I have a broken heart,9
I can't be there, what can I say?10
Now all I feel is guilt.11
I am crying now12
I am not there for you13
It is your birthday, I'm sorry,14
I wish I could be there.15
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This one was to our Uncle Ben, who is MIA, actually he's nuts but we loved him.17
Uncle Ben18
My Uncle was the only one,19
To hold me when I cried.20
He would sit there,21
til my tears dried.22
We got a call from the police,23
there last words took my breath.24
I cried because I'll never know25
If he was beated to death.26
I can't believe,27
He left my side because of drugs28
He stole our things and ran away,29
and all I wanted were some hugs.30
He could be on the streets,31
I really don't want him to be alone.32
He is my uncle, no matter what,33
and matter what, we all need a home.34
Author notes
sorry if that broed u sotry reader, I just like em, and I usually hate poems
Comments
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These are really good. Keep the good work up.
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they are good, and i can understand why they hit you hard.
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it was good but it was sad
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awwww
that's like i have no words...
very touching

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