My last breath, I do proclaim

They mock me.1

They look at me with judging eyes.2

My every move providing them with childish entertainment.3

Everything I say, feeding their cruel minds.4

I'm bringing this upon myself.5

For if I leave.6

Never to return.7

The torment that has brought me such pain, would cease forever.8

I've changed schools.9

Changed towns.10

Wherever I go.11

Whatever I do.12

They mock.13

They judge.14

My mind is limited.15

I am young.16

The only way out.17

My only silver lining.18

My father's friend.19

That protector hiding in his study draw.20

Never am I to touch without consequence.21

But if that protector doth bring my end.22

No consequence need be served.23

Never have I been accepted.24

Never have I been loved.25

Never have I experienced friendship.26

My family brands me failure.27

My peers torment me so.28

For tears lay me to sleep each night.29

Not my mother, nor my father.30

But the salty warmth of my pain showed liquid.31

For years I sit alone.32

Waiting for someone to find me.33

Waiting for someone to love me.34

I hear it calling.35

Father's so called protector.36

It pleads for my hand.37

It pleads for my mind.38

My parents asleep.39

To the study I walk.40

The pleading louder.41

The pleading stronger.42

I lift.43

I aim.44

My last breath, I do proclaim!

Author notes

Wrote this fairly quickly... I'm going through some tough times at the moment... I decided to put my mind to paper.

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  • Dual.Of.Fireflies
    August 9
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    Oh my god this was good! Great job. Very sad, I like stories like this!!!
    ~Duality.

  • firefliie
    June 12
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    • GattonDweller
      June 14
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      you may love the doovy but i'm pretty sure you're far from loving me... I'm sorry Jess...


  • GossipGirlLuvR
    April 9

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    I LOVE this. Everything makes so much sense to me because I also write when I am going through some tough times. Really good job. I could feel the emotion.


  • Maggie Kay
    March 14
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    I have read this before and yes i do really like it and i understand these feelings. Read my other comment for more feed back


  • Holey Pastry
    March 6

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    Moving. Oh my god, that was one loaded piece. I haven't read much poetry on SW, but I have to say, you make me want to go find more.

    Hopefully you find a way over the tougher things in your life at the moment. And the very best of luck in the contest!

    <3 H.P.

  • Maggie Kay
    February 27

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    "for tears lay me to sleep at night" is my favourite line.
    I understand the need to feel acceptance, and the feeling of worthlesness, that your nt wanted.
    Well written and kept my attention threw out.
    Well done


  • Lady Kay
    February 26
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    I'm Sorry

    I must remove this story because it doesn't fit into the categories. it's brilliant tho

  • Lady Kay
    February 25

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    Thank You

    Thanks for entering the contest. Please messege me with the topic you had in mind. I don't seem to understand the topic you chose. I might DQ you. But I'm giving you the chance to messege me.

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