It was that man again. Who else could it be? A clipboard lay serenely in his clutches, just as it did any other time of day, or day of the week. He muttered and mumbled to himself, almost as if the material world did not exist. Perhaps he was plagued by a spell, or caught in a trance? Maybe he was not of a sound mind as he scribbled furiously, walking along. Walking and writing, walking and writing; they consisted of the day's syncopation. Although performed as one act, one piece of music, the two were different. Sometimes incoherent mumbles stuck out like porcupines among rabbits; they just didn't belong.1
His sense of awareness was uncanny. That is to say that it never was. Never was, and never would be. However, a perpendicular awakening occurred in the rest of the community. Questions began to be raised. Did this lone wanderer have a shelter of his own? Who was he? Why does he do what he does?2
As little as anyone knows, the questions still lay dormant. That does not mean the questions do. They breed in speculation, in curious awe. Does he know how mush of a stir he's caused by potentially doing nothing? Perhaps there is reason to his madness. It may just be a natural occurrence, but we feel we are too outgrown as people to enjoy simpler means of entertainment.3
There he goes once again, the silent spook. He wails, but only to himself. Is there perhaps an invisible chain linking him to that clipboard? Upon my approach, the specter pauses. Mutely he looks up, eyes as dead as stone. One brief glance was all it took, almost a mental transfer. One look, and I would never know another look like that again.
His sense of awareness was uncanny. That is to say that it never was. Never was, and never would be. However, a perpendicular awakening occurred in the rest of the community. Questions began to be raised. Did this lone wanderer have a shelter of his own? Who was he? Why does he do what he does?2
As little as anyone knows, the questions still lay dormant. That does not mean the questions do. They breed in speculation, in curious awe. Does he know how mush of a stir he's caused by potentially doing nothing? Perhaps there is reason to his madness. It may just be a natural occurrence, but we feel we are too outgrown as people to enjoy simpler means of entertainment.3
There he goes once again, the silent spook. He wails, but only to himself. Is there perhaps an invisible chain linking him to that clipboard? Upon my approach, the specter pauses. Mutely he looks up, eyes as dead as stone. One brief glance was all it took, almost a mental transfer. One look, and I would never know another look like that again.
Author notes
This was actually a class exercise. We were told to write a story or part of a story in about seven or eight minutes. I'm not exactly sure if I like it, but there's only so much you can do in so little time. I guess it shows that you need to be focused on what you decided to do without deviating from it. (I tend to like to deviate; my mind wanders.) Another name for this type of story is fast fiction.
Comments
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Not bad for a few minutes' work. My curiosity is certainly peeked. I have no idea what's going on, but that is not really a bad thing. It was a nifty little piece of work.
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Thanks! Seeing as you're curious, this was actually inspired by some guy who seriously does this in my city/town. He's kind of the "village nut", if you will. I used to deliver papers, so I saw him all the time.
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That was really cool! I liked it and u did that in 7 or 8 minutes? U get cool points 4 that. lol



