Baseball and Catfish~Part 2 of Pieces of Me

We sat in the back yard on the huge slab of concrete that covered our well that supplied all of our water for the house.1

Freddy had his fishing gear spread out, untangling lines and poles. He was getting ready for a trip down the Susquehanna with Butch. Butch was a tall lanky boy about 16 years old and they were the best of friends. 2

I was only 5 and wanted to help, I always helped my brother. I never knew life without him and to me he was bigger than life.3

I picked up a fish hook, not knowing it was attached to the line he was working on. Fred pulled the pole back and the hook went right through my index finger, blood went everywhere! 4

I remember watching the tears fall down his cheeks at the same moment I wailed in pain. He scooped me up and ran into the kitchen, there he washed my wound and bandaged it and all the while apologising wildly to his baby sister. I smiled and said, "it wasn't your fault Punky, I didn't know that hook was on your line." Yes, I said Punky, when I was smaller I had a minor speech impediment that did not allow me to pronounce any letters combined with the letter R. So my brother Fred became Punky and my sister, Esther became Ettie. Yeah well it was cute when I was two okay!5

At any rate we picked up all of the fishing gear and Fred was ready to go just when Butch arrived. 6

Butch patted the top of my head and said..."hello there Tooter." 7

Fred told him..."I have to Waite about 5 more minutes until Mom gets home from work before we can leave, we can't leave my sister alone."8

Butch replied with..."okay, let's go out back and throw the baseball around." So we did.9

Butch had an uncanny talent for throwing the ball right through the window in the kitchen door, at least once a month no matter where he threw it from. This time my mom came home, went through the front door, through the house and opened the kitchen door just as Butch through the ball. She hollard for us to come in just as the baseball whistled past her head and landed in the pan on the stove.10

All she said was..."Hello Butch, How's your mother today?" 11

Butch, red faced just answered with..."she's fine ma'am." and quickly exited the house.12

Fred kissed me and mom goodbye and said he'd be home in the morning. He and butch sometimes spent the night in an old cabin they'd built on a small island in the middle of the river.13

The next morning, just after day break, they returned home with fresh catfish. Crispy fried catfish and eggs for breakfast, a specialty at our house. My Mother cleaned the fish and fixed breakfast, that wonderful smell wafting through the house waking us all up. Her rolls baking in the oven was the first smell of the morning.14

My mother made some big breakfasts at our house. Besides the catfish, rolls and eggs she made pancakes and red eye gravy. My father was from Texas and raised in Kansas. My Mother was born and bred P.A. Dutch so we were fed quite a variety of foods.15

Butch and Fred and I came down for breakfast, Butch usually slept over when they fished. He loved my mothers cooking. 16

My dad and sister arrived at the table and we all clasped hands as dad blessed the food.17

We all laughed as my mother set a plate in-front of Butch that contained the baseball from the night before. Turning red faced once more, he rolled the ball under the table and our German Shepard chased it through the dining room.18

"You're forgiven", laughed my mother as our plates were passed to be filled with that wonderful crispy fried catfish.
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  • Lurie
    November 11, 2003
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    LOL Maureen! Living so close to the river we ate a lot of catfish! It's still a favorite but I don't get it much anymore. Trying to stay away from all that fried stuff ya know! ~Laura

  • Maureen
    November 10, 2003
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    Enjoyed this chapter, Laura! It is great to travel back in time to days when our lives were just beginning. The family gathering for catfish for breakfast was especially heart-warming. (My only memory of a catfish is catching one when I went fishing with my sister and her boyfriend. Didn't eat it, though...threw it back in.)

    <3 Maureen

  • Lurie
    October 28, 2003
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    Thanks linrose, where have you been girl!!!!

  • Lurie
    October 28, 2003
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    Thanks Sprite,
    Glad you liked the story, it is one of those memories that stay with me. ~Laura









  • October 27, 2003
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    i thougth it was awsome

    heyy that was a really cute story!

  • Lurie
    October 23, 2003
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    YAY I get flowers to!!!!! LOL Butchs' mom was my mothers best friend, Butch was like a brother to!!! I'm so glad you read these Joe!!!! Thank you!!!!! ~Laura


  • -Joey- silver member
    October 22, 2003
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    LMAO gosh Laura these childhood stories are really touching, I am really feeling just how close you were to your brother Freddy, and the love and emotions are just making my little wee heart melt into a puddle over here, you must have been the most precious thing when you were a little girl, must have been so wonderful tohave a sweet little Laura to tag along and love ya like that, He was so blessed as are all of us who are priviliged enough to know that sweet heart of yours, and I have to say I laughed LOL the baseball, the next day LOL, bet Butch was really loved around your house , this whole things was just a wonderful trip down memory lane, memories I feel so priviliged to share with you now ,
    much love always sweety , and big warm hugs and OC a nice kiss and hmmmm :; flowers too
    Most sincerely,
    joe

  • Lurie
    October 20, 2003
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    Yes I have thought of that Ironfeather !!! I am happy that you have confirmed that thought for me. However I am currently working on another book at the momment that should be published no later than May 2004. I then have another book to finish and I have other projects coming as well!!! Thank you for that vote of confidence!! !! I really appreciate it!!! ~Laura

  • Ironfeather
    October 20, 2003
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    You know, Lurie, a collection of these stories in a small book would be welcomed by some of us! Have you thought about doing that?

    This is like going home for those of ust fortunate enough to have grown up poor in the country.

  • Lurie
    October 16, 2003
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    LOL poor Yvonne!!!!!! You silly girl!!! Hehehehehehe ~Laura


  • smiley
    October 16, 2003
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    this one was good also.. I remember when I was about 4 or 5 years old I had stapled my tweety bird and Sylvester comic book to my thumb.. That was very painful for me.

    Yvonne

  • Lurie
    October 15, 2003
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    Noktul, Thank you so much for reading and leaving kind words behind. If you get the chance to read the first story in this collection.. .{This being the 2nd} you will find out more about my sweet brother. ~Laura

  • Noktul
    October 15, 2003
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    While reading this, I had a feeling that it was going to be a nostalgic trip back into childhood, remembering a much-loved dead brother. When he walked out the door to go to the cabin I felt sure that the next morning you would wake up to hear the news that Fred had been killed. Thank you for surprising me.

    I love the way you describe normal family life, I've never eaten catfish and certainly never heard of red eye gravy! What is it?

    Thanks for introducing me to new experiences. And I'm so glad Fred didn't die!

    Noktul

  • Lurie
    October 15, 2003
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    Your comment means so very much to me Arden!!!! These pieces of my life are what makes me who I am! I am so glad that you enjoyed reading! ~Laura

  • arden
    October 15, 2003
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    laurie, i am most impressed wi' this one lass. ahh, made me chuckle about that baseball, i had a friend whom was forever throing his though mi mam's liveing room window. at least once a week, we would get a 'gift' and of corse, bashful as he was, Bo never brought himself to come in and ask for em', so mam would just stock pile them till' he did come over, then wrap them up and gi' then back to him in a gift box. for his sixteenth, we saved sixrttn balls, and hadthem in a hand painted basket, put them in the drivers seat of a new car for him.
    ahh, ye paint a picture as clear as glass reflects here, and take me wi' ye bach to the places ye remember so well. tis' no hardto see the bonds between family here at all. the one between ye and your brother is precious ye know, and so vary vivid in my mind, from reasing this. i can just see the two of ye, ye on his shoulders, as the wee babe, and he, the tall hero of your life. so vera precious are the momnts ye so masterfuly write of in here. i am humbled by ye.

    love,
    arden

  • Lurie
    October 15, 2003
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    You are impressed!!! !!!!!! Coming from you that is a wonderful compliment!! ! Thank you!!!! I don't know how many stories I have with in to me to write but they are all true so far. The first one in this collection was the hardest for me to write...to even begin. Thanks Sprite!!!! ~Laura


  • Sprite silver member
    October 15, 2003
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    I loved the flavor that you imbued this poem with. I could see everything as if I was there. I smiled with you in the end and thought that I could taste those fish that I love too. I would eliminate the line, 'Yeah well it was cute when I was two okay?' It brings the reader back to the present Lurie and I didn't want to be here. I wanted to stay there with the young Lurie!

    I am really very impressed with your story telling ability!

    Wonderful. Joyce

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