wow mom!

mom called me this morning1

Granma' died, 10 to 6 at 922

smaller than a child, she cried3

a week earlier she'd said4

'dress me in my best dress5

lay me ready for my trip6

put my ashes in the same urn7

after I burn, no funeral for me8

my husband, I go to see'9

I recalled seven years before10

when Granpa' was in the back ward11

his memories unravelling with pain12

he told of the long day 'n night13

he crossed the White Horse plain14

through bush n' snow to see her again --15

in the embrace of this now empty space16

their words of tender sweetness17

whisper silently of undying love

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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    February 23

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    very sad, yet heartfelt in your words. Good flow and pace.

    I'm so sorry for your loss. This was a beautiful write.