Lets Make Lots of Money

The music was loud and the champagne was being spilt everywhere. You would feel bad for the maid who had to clean this mess up. It was a five star hotel though, meaning who gives a damn. Kellie and Kyle didn't’t care if the room was left in complete chaos. No, why would two high school students who are now making millions care about a hotel room. Perhaps we should rewind a bit.1

Meet Rachelle, your average teenage girl, worried about how she looks, and wanting to get away from her parents. She used to be a pretty normal A-B student. Unfortunately, that changed when she got into high school. Her grades dropped and she just managed to get by. Now the school likes to consider her “One of those kids.” The ones that wear black, are suicidal, do drugs, and of course have sex with every living things. Rachelle is none of these things, though she did wear black, often. 2

Now, we can’t forget Alex. See where Rachelle is sitting with the group of theater kids. Well, he’s no where near her. You’ll find Alex in the library reading and doing homework more than likely. He’s a mostly A student with a casual B. Alex is just one of those students that the faculty likes to think of as “One of those kids”. You know the ones who will go off and make valedictorian then marry the perfect virgin wife. Yes what a a great American dream, and Alex is well on his way on making this dream realty. For Alex though, something was still missing from his perfect dream. 3

Author notes

Ok so o i'm not giving up on my other story and yes i know i need to get on the ball with that one at this rate it wont be done till i'm out of school  this is just an...intro if you will to an idea that in more contemporary than my other ideas no fantasy to so i would just like some feed back on it like would you want to buy this and read it kind of stuff and your ideas of everything else thanks and i promise to finish my Leo Caroline story

What did you think? Please comment!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments

  • BabyLove
    June 14, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    ooooo i like this at lest the start of it lol

  • Kinky Lil Devil
    June 10, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    did you read the authors note??? its an intro to a story i want to do and i used your name cuz its more unique hope you dont mind but what do you think of the idea

  • XTwilightDreamerX
    June 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    and of course have sex with every living things.
    may i ak wat that is for though? i sure hope this isnt me now.

  • XTwilightDreamerX
    June 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    hey girl!umm i noticed im in this story...or at least i think i am....lols...well if i am i guess its cool, but umm why me?