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I can never get any sleep---every time I turn to look down to see if there's anything under my bed. This hand reaches out, creepingly, from under my bed, with its sinewy, gangly and spotted looking appearance, all the way along down its arm, tapping on the floor and scratching under my bed, it always startles me, and freaks me right out, that I don't actually want to see what it is. The only time that I am brave enough to look down to see what's under my bed is during the daytime, and when I do look, there's nothing there. It is the most terrifying thing that ever happens to me, and when I do start to get to sleep, I always wake up from something slithering up my legs, underneath my covers. After that I start to tremble, shake, and sweat profusely that I get so nauseated that I could vomit all over my bed.2
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Wow, yeah, totally showing emotions so clearly! I used to be scared of things under my bed, because this one night I literally heard something moving around under there, and I thought it was my dog, but then my mum came in a couple minutes later to bring my dog in! Soooo, I was freaked right out of my mind, thinking I was never gonna wake up. Well okay, so I did, but you know a kid's imagination.
Great writing!
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I slept walked once and drempt a big, big spider was chasing me. I never did trust large spiders after that.
Nice write you show emotion clearly.
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