A Mark

I want to wake one morning with the feeling on contentedness in knowing something I said and wrote put the same feeling in someones soul that I get every time I see the sun rise or smell the first fall wind.

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My biggest achievement so far isn't really an awardable achievement. I have done alot of cool stuff, but I most proud of my recent ability to be myself, the one original person I am, and not care what my friends might think of me being a nerdy, loony, random, insightful, loud but introverted version of the me they used to think I was. Thanks

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  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    February 28

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    Oooh, this was easily the most beautiful entry I've yet read. XD Lovely wording included. I agree fully with this,a and would love to do the same.

    - HT


  • TNTrouble
    February 25

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    I agree that being yourself is a really great achievement. Some little word usage errors and grammar issues here and there but a wonderful entry nontheless.


  • lavanya
    February 23
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    very perfect choice of words to explain your dream and your dream is very realistic and perfect. this is good thing that you choose to be wht your are in real ...well done in writing it plus in life.
    good luck dear,and never let anything change your real being.


  • MsAlee gold member
    February 21

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    I love how you worded your goal and know the feeling as well.

    Congrats on the achievement, I still struggle a bit with letting those that know me IRL see all of who I really am.

  • Tomereader
    February 21

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    Well put

    This is superb. You put into words a wish that is worthy of any great sage - real wisdom that, if more people took to heart, would go a long way to making this world a better place.
    As for your achievement being unrewardable - I will give you two clappy dudes for the write and an extra one for the achievement! Keep hold of it with all your might for when all is said and done if you can remain you in spite of all the pressure from outside you will be a strong and dependable person. Well done, keep it up and thank you


  • guardianhost
    February 21

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    Awesome words of wisdom

    In the end having made a difference...
    brillant write. Best Regards
    Cheryl
    all the best for you and yours

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