Time (Introduction)

Hello. My name is 'time'. I play a big role in a story where Tihoku invents a time machine, changes history, and it is up to Aura, the hero, to restore history.1

The characters are Sesshomaru, Rin, Jakken, Aura, Tihoku, The King, Feer, Tribe Leader, and Time.2

To be continued...

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Thanx to AURA, for role playing in the chat room with me...
Couldn't of did it without her.

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  • Tiger-Lily
    March 1

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    Anime roleplay? Don't know, but the names sounded like it. I love roleplay, but the action/adventure kind is long gone for me...

    Good luck with this.

    - HT

  • Non Paix
    March 1

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    Sounds like it should be pretty good for those who are into anime and stuff (the names seem like it is anime-like, sorry if I am wrong in my assumption) I hope it turns out well for you

  • xXTashi-HokuXx
    February 21

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    kinda

    u shouldn't tell the characters at the beggining of the story unless you tell the reader what story they will be in other than that good intro

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, characters: 5.