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“Mm,” Aiden said, kissing my cheek. “I love you Ren.”4
I smiled, my eyes closed. “I love you, too.”5
I was curled into his chest, and his head was in my hair.6
He kissed my forehead, staring at me, I could feel. “You’re so beautiful,” he said, stroking my cheek.7
I opened my eyes to look at him. “You really think so?”8
He kissed my lips so softly, then set his forehead against mine. “No. I really think,” he said, “that you are the most beautiful, magnificent, gorgeous, sweet, perfect creature ever to have been born.”9
I couldn’t help a tear, though I have no idea how I still had any left.10
He smiled, and kissed it away.11
“I love you,” I replied, my love feeling as if it would burst from my chest.12
“I love you so much,” he said. 13
I turned to my other side, and he moved to fit into me, somehow perfectly. He put his head in my hair, and his arms around my waist.14
I was asleep in a matter of thirty seconds, a smile on my face.15
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I woke up in the morning, still feeling his arms around my waist. I smiled, bringing my fists up to rub at my eyes, and yawned.18
“Good morning, my love,” he said, kissing my hair.19
I turned to him, selfish enough to not want to wait to see his gorgeous face.20
Again, he looked like a god, and this time I couldn’t help the swell of pride in my chest; he was mine.21
I laid on my back, closing my eyes again and sighing happily.22
His hand came to my face, and he stroked my cheek, and I could feel his eyes looking at me. Soon I felt his lips on mine, and I wrapped my arms around his neck. He moved, putting his knees on either side of me and deepening our kiss.23
My heart roared, and I had a hand in his hair. Then he pulled his head away, then pecked me again on the lips, before staring down at me.24
His eyes were so beautiful, so full of love, and so much life. They sparkled in a way that made my blood move faster.25
“I love you,” he said, pecking my lips. “I love you,” he kissed me again, then pulled away. “I love you, I love you, I love you.”26
I smiled. “That was random,” I said, pecking his lips. 27
“No, it wasn’t,” he moved and pulled me onto his chest, kissing me again. “I’ve sat here, watching you sleep, wanting to kiss you, for the last hour and a half.”28
I looked at the clock. It was ten o’clock.29
I couldn’t help smiling. “Really?” I asked.30
He looked down at me, smirking. Then he kissed me again, long, and hard, one hand stroking my cheek, the other my back. When he pulled away, his breath was hard, almost as hard as mine. “Really.”31
I stared down at him, love showing through my eyes. He was so perfect. He was so utterly beautiful.32
“Do you really love me?” I asked, absolutely at awe, and unable to understand how this beautiful man could be here right now, with me.33
He stared at me. “Ren,” he said. “Are you kidding?”34
I stared at him.35
He sighed, pulling my head down to his chest, taking my hand in his.36
“I have never, in my life, told a girl I loved her, unless she was my family,” he said into my hair. I was so surprised, I looked up at him, and his eyes told me he was serious. He really hadn’t.37
He kissed my lips. “Do you think I would lie to them?” he asked. “I would never, ever tell anyone that unless I knew I meant it. I truly meant it.” He kissed my forehead. “I really love you. I always have. I can’t not.” He moved me to his side, looking deep into my eyes, and kept my hand.38
“I really love you, Serenity,” he said, bringing my hand to his lips. My throat was on fire. “I really adore you. Every beautiful part of you. I really treasure you, my little Serenity. I really, honestly and fully love you.” He saw through my tears the doubt in my eyes.39
“Serenity! Do you hear me?” he said, stroking away the tears almost harshly. “I would never, ever lie to you! I love you!” He kissed my lips, and I felt dizzy before he took his lips from mine. “I love you,” he whispered this time, stroking my cheek. “I adore you.” He kissed me softly. “I want you,” he said, bringing his hand down to stroke my jaw. His lips followed, kissing first my lips, then my jaw, and into my neck he whispered, “I want you,” to himself. He kissed the flesh of my neck and I swear I caught aflame; I could barely breathe, and I loved it.40
“I love you.” He kissed my collar bone and I shivered, incredibly. I heard that his breath was ragged like mine. “I want you,” he whispered again, as if to himself. He stroked my collar bone, and then alternated, kissing it, stroking it, kissing it.41
I couldn’t breathe. My heart was beating beyond control. Before I hyperventilated, he moved and placed his head on my chest. I knew he could head my heart. He lay there, listening, and we both struggled to catch our breath.42
As soon as I thought I could do so without suffocating myself, I moved my hand to stroke his hair, my eyes closed, and my breath still nothing close to normal.43
“I love you,” he whispered, kissing my collar bone and then laying his head back on my chest. 44
I kissed his temple. 45
“I love you, too, Aiden,” I barely sputtered out. 46
He was perfect. He was absolutely perfect. 47
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Author notes
Haha.
HORMONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!
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Comments
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xDD Sweetness itself Renee! I am like, raging right now in my own hormones. xDDDD *sigh* Now I'll be dreaming about my Aiden...thank God I have him. ^-^
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I love this!!! Renee your awesome!! this whole story rocks!!
Make Jesse read this, please. This is what I want in a guy. ^_~
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Thanks so much, Meg! 
You're awesomer. *Sigh.* Don't we all? 
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.......xD Just take the three applause and write more.
~*Princess*~
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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amazingggg!
oh my goshhhhh
aiden is so sweet!
Thank God i have an aiden of my own. <33
the part where she asks him if he really loves her reminds me of me and my guy....O.O haha
but i love thisss
all of the chapters are so amazing
way sappy, but pshhh, i've always loved sappy stuff XD
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Okay.. Aidan makes my boy look like an IDIOT! I love this part and I wish I had an Aidan.. some one that truely perfect
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He does, mine, too, no worries; he's only the guy of my dreams, AKA there is no guy on Earth this perfect! ^^
Thanks so much for the comment, and someday you will find your own Aiden, and love his faults, which this Aiden hasn't seem to have shown yet. [You know, except the lact of taste in food.]
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this shit is perfect! =) <3
i want more!
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Thanks so much! Yes, ma'am, soon to come!
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Awww, he's so sweet! I should ask my guy if he realy loves me, just to see what he says =]
I'm so in love with your stuff!
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I know, right!? Good luck... I might actually do it, too. [I might have him read this first! ]
Ha! Well, that's odd, I wonder why... But thanks!!
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Your Author notes.
How... unbelievably, amazingly, wonderfully romantic.
You're going to make every girl reading this want an Aiden of their own.
And almost every boy wondering what the heck is wrong with the guy.
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Aren't I adorable?
Thank you! I'm such a mush.
Ha, I even want an Aiden of my own! But thanks, it means I'm doing my job. ^^
... I love you Naila.
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Very.
You're welcome! And aren't we all?
You'll find yours. I know it. Marvelously well. =]
I love you Taylor.
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I was kidding.
I suppose.
I think I might have. ^^ I love you.
I love you more than I love the concept of a real life Aiden! -
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But I wasn't.
See!? I knew it! Now I'm going to IM you with a whole bunch of questions that you must answer! I love you more.
You leave me, once again, speechless and melted. -
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I know! Weird! >.<
I love you Naila. And I'll actually answer them, because I love you. And, you know, you're sort of my best friend Aiden, my Naila. You don't.
You deserve to be as at a loss for words and liquidlike as humanly possible!
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Not really.
Yay! Thank you!!! I love you!!! ...Really?
I do.
As long as I get to return the favour.
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