Floating

It hurts here,1

So I take my leave,2

Take away the yelling,3

Take away the screams,4

Take away the pain with a 5

single 6

solitary 7

leaf.8

Intoxicating sweetness,9

Sets sail my graveyard mind,10

Smoke tendrils wrap around,11

Leaves you far behind.12

Bittersweet symphony,13

Plays for me,14

I see the things that you can't see.15

Soft glow of warmth,16

Dancing spirals tingling down,17

Softly flying, no more crying,18

I am floating on the ground. 19

Pick up the pieces of a shattered past,20

Mold them into green,21

A soft cool glass.22

I take a trip to be alone,23

Talking on my daisy phone.24

The rainbows buried inside my hand,25

Blazing colors 26

Stuck inside a faithless land.27

Breathe it in,28

Choke it down,29

A bubble of laughter,30

Slams the silence with sound. 31

Softly flying, no more crying,32

I am floating on the ground. 33

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  • Deadly Shame
    June 8, 2005
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    I wouldn't know how accurate... but it's really pretty and it fits together perfectly. Wonderful writing.


  • ObsidianButterfly
    June 8, 2005
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    super

    way to go!! I like this .... daisy phone hahahahaha. I think this is a very acurate discription too. Because I would know?! Yea so see you later good job!!-obsi

  • buRning Memory
    June 8, 2005
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    this is so excellent perfect depth and i know exactly what your saying... its smoking alone man.. do it all the time... perfect expression of that keep up the good work much luck
    this contest is gonna be hard to judge
    much love
    katie