"Shut up! The Twilight Premiere is on!", I snapped at my sister. 1
"Mum! Shanice told me to shut up!", Cara whined. I rolled my eyes, still staring at the television.2
"I want to watch Cinderella!!", Cara whined. I ignored her, she was pretty annoying for a 7 year old.3
"Shanice! I want to watch Cinderella now!!", Cara screamed,stomping her feet.4
"You can watch Cinderella when ever you want, and I never get to watch what I want.", I said trying to speak to her nicely. Cara frowned.5
"I'm going to tell on you!", She smiled with an expression of evil.6
"What are you going to say? I never did anything to you", I said concentrating on the television.7
"Mum! Shanice hit me!!", Cara started crying falsely. She has always been good at making herself cry. Mum walked into the sitting room.8
"Shanice, how could you be so cruel to your little sister! She looks up to you, and you're letting her down!", Mum glared at me.9
"You always take her side", I said calmly, looking back at her. 10
"Shanice, stop being childish and grow up. Why can't you be more like your sister?", Mum said.11
"I don't know, I guess I don't whine enough", I said with heavy sarcasm.12
"I want to watch Cinderella mommy", Cara said, pouting out her bottom lip. I gasped in disgust.13
"Ok sweetie, Shanice put on the video", Mum said coldly.14
"I'm watching the twilight Pre-"15
"I don't care! Just put on the movie!", Mum shouted. I sighed in defeat and put the stupid movie on. 16
"Thank you Mommy!", Cara said, completely back to her normal evil self.17
"I'm going to bed", I sighed as I walked to my room.18
I opened the door to find that my Twilight poster of Edward had been drawn on.19
"CARA!!! YOU LITTLE BITC*!!", I screamed.20
"Mum!!", Cara cried.21
"Don't you dare speak like that! Who the hell do you think you are?! You don't have the right to speak like that to anyone! You get in that room! You are definitely not going to the concert! First you hit your sister, then you swear at her! She's just a little girl!", Mum screamed at me. 22
"But she-"23
"Get in your room now!", Mum yelled again.24
I slammed the door in her face. I hate having siblings! Ugh. And a mom! I wish I had a Dad! I paced the room, angry and upset. I was going to have to start all over again tomorrow. Stupid Cara, Stupid Mom! I wish I had nice parents like Esme and Carlisle! And a nice sister like Alice! What am I saying?! Those people don't even exist! They're just characters!25
My life is definitely screwed!
Author notes
Uhmm yeah...Don't be too harsh.
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Comments
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Makes me think how lucky i am to be an only child! and this was really funny! typical little sisters and Cinderella 
Loool well done on the contest! you deserved it!
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She.Drew.On.EDWARD! I'm going to KILL HER! And so is Edward! nice job.
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I really like this story. I have read it before and i still love it. Little sisters can seriosly be so fustrating at time! Great work, i couldnt any errors at all.
Best of luck in my contest!
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HAHa, i agree with RenesmeeCCullen. Thank the heavens i don't have any sisters. Loved it
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haha kool if my sister ever made me miss twilight i would shove her in a garbage can.
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Sounds like my sister exactly! -
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Nice. You could write an amazing story using this one, one that doesn't have your personal qoutes and thoughts written, but implied. Siblings are hard. I admit it. Good luck with her.
P.S. I love Twilight too, would never give the premire up for a little sister.beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 3, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 4.
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Lmao, for this, I generally tend to deal with my sibs myself. If you let 'em get away to the parents, you are screwed!
I have four siblings. x.x Three of 'em are under 11.
I wouldn't really want a mom like Esme. She's more likely to side with the sweet "little ones".
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well good for
me im the baby
in the family
but my sister
is 15 and she
get's me mad
some time's but
in the end i will
love her for ever and ever
some time's i hate it win
i get her mad cuz she look's like
she was crying and that make's me feel sad
so i tell her i love her and she say's me to
and we hug and i tell her dont cry plz but she love's me
and i love her and yeah that's how we r like ^-^ -
My little sister's like that sometimes. I would KILL her if she screwed me over like that. Good Story though.
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LOL thanks but this isn't true. It happened a few times with cousins...still does...all the fricken time! Sorry sorry back to what I was saying. I am lucky to not have a little evil sister. I am an only child, there are good points and bad points to this. Good points : My own room, cool presents, in charge of the television. Bad Points : Being bored a lot...and others reasons too. But any way sorry if you have an annoying sibling, I got a small dose of what you must get every day. Good Luck, show your siblings that they are not Superior. Get your own way.
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that was funny...and i must say i hate my siblings too. you're not alone there. great job!
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Sad she drew on him......meanie..that is wrong on every level. I liked it a lot and though it was very attention grasping!! Hope you and your sister work out. lol
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she drew on Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!! Blasphemy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome story though.............. Great Job!!
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This was good, I think we all go through that some time in our life. If not a sibiling, a cousin. Nice job, and good luck with your sister.
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Little sisters are evil...the poster thing has happened to me. Taylor Swift just doesn't look right with horns and a beard...then again neither would Edward. Hey now i'm trying to nogotiate something with Alice and Jasper and here you are saying they don't exist
Good story though!
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is this a true story? if yes i totally no how u feel
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Little siblings can be such a pain... They always get what… Love the story, by the way!
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omg i understand how fustraiting little sisters can be. my annoys the crap outter me, she is just so anoying and childish. she is 13 and is the youngest in the family and she is such a cry baby.
the story was very good and realistic. i loved the last pargaraph it was so good and so many people could relate to that, wishing they belonged in a make believe family that does not even exist. any way nice job with the story!
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