Memoirs of a \

His eyes shone that night. That night when my fate was decided by the council of beggars. They shined with a gleam I had never seen before. Malevolence dripping from his stare. Who was i to lean on then? Who was i to trust?! I didn't know, and i still don't. But i do know that tomorrow might bring that person. I know that maybe tomorrow his eyes will reflect regret, or pity or repentance for divulging my person to them. Tomorrow might be perfect.....Tomorrow might be too late.1

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There is alot of symbolism in there, so if it doesn't make sense to you, lol, don't worry; 'tis the webbing that fills my mind

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  • nortonmui
    June 28, 2006
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    New comment!!! I think I understand this better now. I think it is destiny to meet someone. Someone who is a stranger with mysterious eyes. Eyes that embodies strong emotions and sometimes malevolent feelings. When someone look into his eyes, they feel insecurity but still want to be with him. And the guy would stay with her or leave tomorrow. It is good. I am not that good at reading and being aware symbolism at the same time. I am more literal.


  • ForgottenxMe
    June 7, 2005
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    i understand nothing......lol............but the fact that i understand nothing makes me love it even more....LOL yes im weird... GOOD WRITE

  • Heather.x
    June 7, 2005
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    i understand it and i love it! well done x