Longing for ocean where she swam as a child
for the crystal sparkling depths that lifted
her body up and gently set it down
floating her away from new born cries
and the pain delivered by the bottle.1
the grimy streets filled with children
chasing each other down alley ways
and the hot day relieved with
an ice cream shared between three of them.2
The chaos of creating a feast out of
chicken ,rice and tortillas- laughter
and crude jokes ringing against
the background of poverty.3
Missing the feel of the muddy dirt
freezing her feet in the cold winter
after a rain- the feel of freedom
beyond chain link fences.4
Author notes
twilight is amazing except ppl who hate it"
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I love this poem, thank you for entering it in my contest.
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this is truly an amazing piece of work!!!
I like the free and lively feeling it gives off, and
the way you made them all sound like a closely knit family.
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sweet as poem! i liked it heaps! well done
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thanx 4 ur entry
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What did you think of the poem? thats it?
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Sorry- I just saw that its in the prelims- sorry for being rude. With my that's it/
I had another story I spent three months on for a particular contest and I 'm just frustrated because the judges didn't really say anything because they didn't know what they felt about my story.
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