i wanted to go with you1
but you told me no2
i should stay3
i was mad4
that you were treating me 5
that way6
so you drove off7
and left me there8
i hated you at that moment9
i wanted you to never come back10
now i wish i would have never said that11
when that call came12
everybody was crying13
but i didnt know14
that you were dying15
you were in a crash16
on 24917
some driver drove into you and your mom18
and you roled over in a ditch19
we left in a hurry20
to go see if you were ok21
and im betting myself up22
up intil this day.23
you died before they could get you out24
and it was my fault without a dout25
but i think i have an angel26
because i wasnt with you27
it changed my life28
but i miss you29
R.I.P - Elizabeth 30
Author notes
this goes out to Shorty(nickname) and she died. so rest in peice. she died like a month or 2 ago and im finally coming to grip with reality that she's dead and we wont have those late night phone calls. love ya girl.
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aaw i am so sorry about your friend. This makes me cry cause I think about how I would feel if I were you. but remember it's not your fault. at all. the poem was perfect. i loved it. good job.
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It's the worst thing to loose someone like the worst thing. Hope you get through it, and at least you got a great poem. And still remember it wasn't your fault.
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Don't ever blame yourself for what life does on it's own. You did not do this, life did this. Believe that, because nothing will ever be more true about death in my experiences. That and that no matter what happens, they will always be with you.
-Laura.LocoLaura.Josey
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nernwon umm you never told me about this and you never looked sad or any thing but great poem anyways....
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VERY SAD!
This is very sad.
But believe me, you did not cause her to die.
'FATE' did. Fate budded in causing an unthinkable coincidence.
I know it'll be hard knowing that you were mad at her that last day, but hopefully you'll be able to remember all the good times you two had together and you'll be able to have happy memories of her. It'll take time, but it eventually works. Sorry to hear about this.
From your friend through me.
Love ya, sister!
Brian
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