Love is you and me

I always hated the way I could never have the one I wanted. I use to think it was because I was never as beautiful as all the other girls. Then one day I caught your eyes and it seemed like we were locked to one another’s glances for eternity. I loved the way you looked at me, because for a second I know I crossed your mind. 1

Soon my dreams turned to reality I was no longer thinking of being with you, I was actually there. Held in your arms, tasting your passionate embrace. Smiling at the lingering kisses upon my cheeks. Your arms wrapped around my waist keeping me close to you, as though you’d never let me go. I would never want to go, because here I was….in love. 2

I thought I’d nearly lost you, over petty fights we had. I never meant those things I said and I know we’d both take the words back. I just wanted you to know, how you really made me feel and how without you, my life would be incomplete. Emptiness would be in place of my heart, which only you could fill.3

I want you back in my heart where you belong. I want this loneliness to disappear. I don’t know if you feel the same as I do but I don’t want to risk the chance of loosing you forever. I’d rather have you in my life as a friend then not have you in my life at all. 4

Then suddenly you realised you needed me to. It wasn’t just a short fling relationship; you felt the passion through you to. Then once again your eyes locked with mine, we forgot about the arguments and the fights that were in pastime. I closed my eyes and felt your body caress mine. I was safe and secure in your arms.5

You lifted my head to look into your meaningful eyes. Your slender fingers intertwine with mine and your grasp pulls me closer to you. I am in love and not ashamed. Just this time I’ll make sure we’ll never fall out of love again.6

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  • stolen fairy
    June 6, 2005
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    ahhh, too true for me right now... fantastic write. you've got a blessed talent. good luck for the contest
    ~tara

  • GyPsychic
    June 6, 2005
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    Very cool poem. Especially for people who've been there done that. Keep up the creative writing.


  • sky black
    June 6, 2005
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    AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know the feeling, nice write babe, very powerful and deep, loving, l8az babe love ya sky xxxxxx

  • shaitus
    June 6, 2005
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    Really beautiful.
    I thought it was a personal incident.
    Then i have seen the Author's comment to
    realize that..it is contest poem.
    All well wishes.
    ~shaitus.